|Reviews for Odd Moments|
| pinetrees chapter 57 . 2/15/2016
You have this gift that allows you to just... Fuck people up soooo well
| Fireworks chapter 57 . 1/11/2015
This was really good I loved all your story lines and back stoies you had for eatch individual.
But to be completely honest because I read 'odd couple' first at the end u mention DPD bring D-con I kinda expected more detail on how that happen in this Arc also more on how prowl come secound -in-command and more on jazz storyline or how lockdown coped being on the runn(maybe some of this is aswned in the squeal on liveJournal).
Still I loved the ending and I have loved looking at the FanArt.
I will get around to reading the squeal to odd couple even if u said the your end post on odd couple it will be random dribbles there still so many what If's
Thank you for both your amazing stoies your so talented at writing (even drawing) and I hope u get back to writing more fanfiction because I noticed the last time u update was quite some time ago (hope Ya ain't dead)
Thank you -fireworks
| lydiaroseonwingsofsong chapter 57 . 5/22/2013
Wow. This story was so fantastic (although I have to admit I only really read the Decepticon parts) that all I could do today was read it. I'm not totally sure how I feel about the ending, but it was well written and logical, and I'm definitely going to look up your notes/ continuation of it on your LiveJournal account. Overall, though, fantastic job!
| Mimi MC chapter 34 . 1/4/2013
Seven years later? Wait what happened?
Love this chapter so much, not only did we get a interesting backstory, we see a deeper side to the president's favorite assassin.
| GrowlingPeanut chapter 34 . 9/13/2012
Okay, that's it. I officially love your Soundwave. I said I wanted to take him home. I want to *keep* him. I want to do all sorts of things with him, and I'll leave all that to the imagination. Hint: mostly snuggle. He's so loveable and sweet and quiet and Iknowsignlanguageanditwouldb esomuchfuntotalktohim and I'm talking like Blurr. Plus, I mentioned I've seen the art and he is...hot. Very. Anyway.
Sign language is one of the sweetest, most beautiful languages I've ever seen. I loved that bit at the end there where he signed 'thank you'...
Would you mind if I used him in a little one-shot, I want to mess around with a slightly different background for him and possibly a girlfriend (also a humanized TF, to fit the universe (which I LOVE), an OC of mine)? That sentence was constructed terribly. They'd be college aged, so just a little younger than he is here...I'm rambling. But is that okay? I love him and the world needs more of him!
And last, but certainly not least, I love the way you write in general. There's really no way to go in depth because it would take up too much space, but I absolutely adore it. It's perfect. Keep up the spectacular work!
| surxi25 chapter 57 . 8/21/2012
I don't think I can properly express how much I loved this. You humanized the characters perfectly, translating both their flaws and personal quirks in a really believable way and giving them motivations that were plausible.
I loved every single one of the characters (Megs is a sex beast, Shockwave is a bamf, Blurr and the twins are too cute for words, BA is a crazy bitch and Soundwave, y u so adorable?), but I must admit that Megatron and Starscream take the cake. Their dynamic was perfect. The power plays, the UST, the constant push and pull... It rings so true. They are both willing to sacrifice so much in order to achieve their goals that you realize they genuinely deserve each other. And Screamer is such a flawed person, you can't help but feel a bit sorry for him. To be honest, it's refreshing to find such a well written character.
I'll stop rambling now and say that I loved this story to pieces and you made an amazing job writing it. Seriously, good work :)
| Httw chapter 57 . 9/11/2011
"simply beautiful" is what I meant to end with over on OC. My iPod enjoys embarrassing me. :)
These stories were a great read, they definitely added to the masterpiece that OC was. Of all of them my favorite was Torque and Scrapper's story. I don't know if I've ever read anything that has sat so perfectly with me. As funny as they are together, they are just perfect for each other and Snarl gave me a real laugh.
My second favorite would be Megs and poor Stah-scream (giggle). I went over on lj immediately and continued where you left off, and again, you made another perfect ending for this series. I love your style and skill, it is breathtaking to read.
| Httw chapter 55 . 9/7/2011
As heart-breaking as it is, I love how this parallels canon. And it's funny, I hadn't noticed how much it was parallel until Skyfire was walking out the door. By that point I just wanted to cry for what both of them were losing.
| Httw chapter 48 . 9/7/2011
That face always reminds me of a handle-bar mustache. Regardless, that is what my expression morphed into with Longarm's appearance. Slurped has good instincts
| Httw chapter 34 . 9/5/2011
That was an amazing chapter. You have such skill with story-telling. There is no need for flowery langue; the simplist of words is as strong as a hammer getting its point across. Reading your work is a true pleasure and it comes out in these stand alone chapters.
| Httw chapter 29 . 9/3/2011
Buahahahahhahhahahahhaa! BUT ISN'T BRADBURY SHOCKWAVE'S CAT? or maybe I've misread my fanon... But this will be interesting regardless.
| Httw chapter 28 . 9/3/2011
I did notice he kept the "ring" there. I am so sharp! :D
Stah-screeeeeem~ what a hilarious thought.
| Httw chapter 26 . 9/2/2011
That was a tad depressing. My younger brother asked me today who I liked best, the good guys or the bad guys of Transformers? I told him I liked them all, and this here is exactly the reason why. :)
On another note. I am really curious about Mama and Papa Seeker. I saw what you did there with Prowl's father and in curious if you've done the same thing here. It's funny; the more you don't talk about them the more I want to know. This sounds familiar but I get this nagging feeling it's something I'm not supposed to talk about. ... :D
| Httw chapter 25 . 9/2/2011
I DON'T THINK SHE'S A SUE! :)
That was an involuntary shout there, I swear! I love Torque! She feels like a realistic, saddly alone 31-year-old woman with a shitty job and an iffy best buddy. I do think 'seeing' her as a human instead of a giant robot is easier, however. For whatever reason, I find humanized Torque seems much more like a normal person than any of the 'bots or 'cons. I suppose it was opposite in Partners but not at a gig enough level where I didn't like her there. Either way, I enjoy her as a character. She doesnt feel like a sue at all.
| Httw chapter 23 . 9/2/2011
"Violin hips." I have never heard that description before, but is an absolutely delicious way to describe someone. An good for you Starscream! Don't you take Megatron's shit for nothing!