|Reviews for helter skelter|
| manhattan martini chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Lovely. Heartaching, the good kind.
| ring for an augustine chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Wow, I really love this! "It’s not love because their hearts aren’t beating" is a really powerful and sort of morbidly beautiful line, and I think it's the one that stood out the most to me. But the whole thing is really well-written, and I love your style. I hope you don't mind if I favorite you and this story!
| CrimsonNoble chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
An example, I think, of how telling can be just as cool as showing.
(second paragraph of part ii oh god yes)
But yeah. Loved it. And the rest of your TWEWY fic.
| Azalee chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
Oh god Eri/Shiki, yess. And breathtakingly beautiful, at that. Beautiful wording, syntax, structure - just beautiful.