Reviews for Moving On
lucariosgirl22 chapter 25 . 5/11
Siriabelle Grace chapter 13 . 5/1
Ouch! I wouldn't want to be Dumbles at that moment!
lauraovertime chapter 4 . 3/9
when the graduation thing came up, my first thought was him randomly appearing in the middle of the great hall and yelling out "I'M BACK, BITCHES!"
6tigercubs chapter 36 . 2/5
Do by and wonky already have said two in an earlier chapter...why was Draco in school? And why are they talking so freely around Bella? And this is like my fourth time reading this story...
6tigercubs chapter 35 . 2/5
I do wish you would edit this story...Sirius keeps switching between being a vampire and not...but I love the plot none the less...oh and about their powers...harry already had mind speak with them all before you announced the mind reading...
TalaDentro chapter 3 . 1/14
In this chapter there are some beta notes left in that really throw a reader off like "verb confusion consider revising."
Animeangellover2 chapter 46 . 11/21/2014
Great story! I'm glad everyone got to live peacefully in the end- especially Harry. It was a nice, flowing story- read it in a day!
thehereandnow33 chapter 46 . 8/25/2014
This story was not one of my favorites of your works...the whole story seemed rushed, unrealistic and mediocre ...did u write this one when u were younger because I read some of your newer works and they were AMAZEBALLS...I was so surprise when reading seemed like a whole different author...but I kept reading it hoping to see the compelling writing I witnessed in one of the others I've read...sadly I was DISSAPOINTED...
thehereandnow33 chapter 22 . 8/24/2014
I hope u don't plan on letting all of those kids going to hs...loll
thehereandnow33 chapter 21 . 8/24/2014's too much peopleeeeee
godess bubbles chapter 46 . 8/2/2014
I liked it, but I thought Harry was going to top, with the whole being stronger and a war hero With in the Summery you had HP/EC usually that means Harry would be the top...But I still liked it!
ctm07 chapter 46 . 4/27/2014
Brilliant !
summerfunfun chapter 21 . 1/10/2014
I kinda think harry should be with jasper... Because they both have fought in a war.. I still think this story will be great and appreciate you writing this story
tamashiyuki chapter 46 . 12/19/2013
Muy bueno!
Cool2002 chapter 46 . 12/10/2013
I think that you should definitely do a sequel.
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