Reviews for If it's Not Fun, You're Not Doing it Right
LittleVegeBul chapter 1 . 8/7
Now that was funny! Great story i love stories like these! Keep writing stories!
roxyfire57 chapter 1 . 4/25/2015

awesomely cute
destorymishima chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
Awesome :D
Poodie chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Awesome ish! This was great really reaplu great! Would have ended with more detail! XD
serenityselena chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
entertaining story :)
Danny chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
Just wonderful!
anyahibiki chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
Such a cute, funny story!
Mira chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
This reminded me of the Lion King 2... which probably means I'm spending too much time with my little cousin.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2013


And fun.

Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
great job were is the second part
Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
jessi chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Excellent story!
KimiruMai chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
LOL that was so cute :3 I love reading about food fights between these two XD
Haphazard Snow chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
Awesome fic! I think you did a great job with this and I hope to read more from you soon!
Rafiki the Soothsayer chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Oh, FUCK yeah! What a great one-shot! Funny and heart-warming.

Y'know, a lot of the Vegeta/Bulma stories I read are these really angsty super-fics that show Vegeta and Bulma getting together after going through many depressing trials. And even though I really love those stories, THIS one-shot was just... well... fun! It was a really in-the-moment sort of deal where Vegeta and Bulma just let themselves go, act like kids for a little, and then end the experience with a kiss. It was very realistic and even though Vegeta's kiss was unexpected, it wasn't at all out of character.

And I loved how he had ulterior motives for helping Bulma with the kitchen.

Good job!
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