|Reviews for I Will See You Again|
| WiseOldSoul chapter 19 . 5/18/2016
so she is able to transport the whole house.
so why did aro have to transport her car?
why did they have to run or drive anywhere?
she could just have transported herself and heidi from
Votera to US? why did she have to run slower so that
she doesnt lose the cullens so they can follow when she could
have simply transported them all to her house?
too many incongruity in this story...
| WiseOldSoul chapter 18 . 5/18/2016
sorry but this is silly.
why is she lying to them about the mission?
she can confide in them and try to come up with a plan
and include their help in trying to prevent aro from taking her back.
even if she has affection for them, if she has all of these cool powers,
surely she should be able to persuade aro to leave her and cullens
alone? just by threatening him, she can prob achieve this...
i dont understand the purpose of this story once she returns to
the cullens, she should be able to stay with them...
in fact, she should have been able to do this a long time ago, after
having copied all of these cool powers!
| WiseOldSoul chapter 16 . 5/18/2016
after 107 years, over 100 years, the classrooms are the same?
the school system is the same? Newton's descendant is going to school in Forks?
the meadow is still intact? there had to have been some changes? some
evolution after 107 years?
| WiseOldSoul chapter 15 . 5/18/2016
this story has some good ideas...unfortunately, its continuity is all messed up.
for example, the scent...jasper smelled freesia, he said it was the same scent as
bella but deeper. if this was the case, why didnt the others pick up on it, esp
edward? jasper also states she looks like bella except more beautiful being a vampire...
add that to the scent, why didnt anyone else know this was bella?
also, bella is the "most powerful" vampire able to take down the Volturi all
by herself. so if she can do this, why hasnt she? why has she stayed in Volturi all
of this time? she is a sponge, able to copy all of the powers and has numerous
powers, she could have used some of these powers to even disable the volturi but
now we know she can beat them all by herself...
why hasnt she revealed herself yet? why must she tell everyone one by one?
does she have some secret plan that she hasnt revealed yet to the readers?
but whether she has a plan or not, i dont get why she hasnt left them yet to return
to edward, her love?
there are many other questions i have but just dont have the time atm...
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/30/2016
You need to learn how to spell
| Guest chapter 34 . 6/27/2015
best story ive read in a long time
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/22/2014
Foolproof Cullens dying :0
| Luvingtheshadowhunters chapter 8 . 9/27/2013
You had me shaking in fear by the end of this chapter! Very good!
| turnerbk chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
| Anna chapter 3 . 1/22/2013
Like Edward...listening to Gaga?
| Guest chapter 18 . 10/14/2012
YES! that is really cool! How did you do it?
| BlueEyedKlutz chapter 33 . 2/26/2012
what is the sequal called i really want to read it xxxx
| GoldEyedAngel chapter 27 . 6/18/2011
omg wat is bella gonna do know!
| Alina Bee chapter 12 . 1/11/2011
i love how everybody calls bella a bich. GOOD STORY THOUGH!
| Taeniaea chapter 34 . 11/23/2010