Reviews for The AfterGame
Random Reader Guy chapter 11 . 2/28/2014
Does Gatito exist in this fic?
NoXIIISokaiFan chapter 6 . 8/2/2013
...woah. What just happened? That was one of the BEST kiss scenes I've read in a long time! Amazing work!
MOOOOOOOOOORE chapter 11 . 4/20/2013
DarkLinkBlade chapter 11 . 1/13/2013
Ups dates soons
TheEighthLight chapter 11 . 9/26/2012
why did u stop updating
visionsofmangos chapter 9 . 2/25/2012
hahahahaa! Loving this story - this was probably my favorite chapter, mostly because of the conversation with Mr. H. niiiiice!
Strife The Dark 152 chapter 11 . 4/4/2011
nice story, hahaaha! when life gives you lemons, you beter hope they don't hit you in the forehead, well in short, awsome story and battling style

P.s. Lefty cat, righty cat, and brainy cat are suppory pins, have them in one deck and pins the have a boot till there usable have and instant boot and reboot times are cut in half

my pin set with those:

lefty cat, brainy cat, 2 lighting arrester mastered, and aqua barrier.
Chorinas chapter 11 . 3/1/2011
a few comments

1. awesome fic.

2. your short chapters suck

3. your update speed sucks.

4. point 1 completely makes up for points 2 and 3.
Arukoir chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
The way Joshua abruptly appears and shoots Neku was too funny!
starlingnight chapter 11 . 3/29/2010
'I had never realized it before, but Shiki was really Kawaii!'

Who is this and what did he do with Neku? :/

It's alright if he's mildly OOC but this is more like full on...well, full on OOC.

Anyway the story is very cute. I giggled and squee'd quite a bit :3 Hahaha, Matchmaker!Josh is win.
SeraphineKH chapter 11 . 3/19/2010
Umm it sounds very ironic and I dun understand the end part. Where did that lemon come from!

So far, this sounds rather like the same thing you get for school fics. You gotta put in a more sense of urgent danger.
fallouise chapter 11 . 2/20/2010
Omigosh, you UPDATED. It is actually pretty nice, with Mr. Doi predicting stuff. I know that you might've changed your writing style, but it still is pretty great!
Icebox Plums chapter 10 . 9/2/2009
I kind of like the story in general. It's not the most original thing out there, but it is cute and you do have something resembling a writing style. But man, what's up with the chapter length? If you don't have to scroll down to read the whole thing, it ain't long enough. XP
Icebound Observer chapter 11 . 7/27/2009
Nice NekuxShiki fic ya got here. I don't really have much to say, cuz I'm not good at that kinda stuff.

I know this question has nothing to do with the story, but where can I find the Big Crunch pin? I've got Big Bang just laying around idly.
Hitorimono chapter 11 . 5/24/2009
F this story! F it to high heaven! **shot**

Sorry. Couldn't resist.

The lemon bit was genius, just so you know. I eagerly await the next chapter.

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