Reviews for Witches of Twilight
Smallerbeams chapter 31 . 1/24
Absolutely amazing.
Debbie Hicks chapter 31 . 11/15/2024
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GluttonyOfReading chapter 31 . 7/16/2024
AND SHE DIDN'T EVEN CHANGE!? ARE YOU JOKING? I'm pissed she didn't change and we'll never have a sequal.
GluttonyOfReading chapter 29 . 7/16/2024
I always hate this scene. If she wasn't so self sacrificing she wouldn't be in this mess. I hope she actually changes otherwise she'll be left with nasty scars and have to go through the change again later and considering we havent had a sequal in over ten years I don't think we'll be getting one. So if she's going to change it'll need to be in this story. I knew she could've ripped him apart. I'm glad she did.
GluttonyOfReading chapter 28 . 7/16/2024
I feel like they dovhavevthe power to rip them apart if necessary. Remember what Addys mom said. They'll push themselves and then realize there is no limit to the blanket. Hopefully they all become vampires. She's honestly still doubting him after all the kisses and him fighting for her?! I always hate that. It's so disappointing to see her have so little self worth and that she won't believe Edward love her. It's insulting to everything Edward is doing for her. I wish I could find a story with a Bella that has some self respect and self worth. Always with the self blame. It's James fault not Bellas. Bella just giving up would've made me punch her. That's utterly pathetic. Sickening honestly.
GluttonyOfReading chapter 27 . 7/16/2024
I hope she doesn't do anything stupid like sacrifice herself and if she does then I hope to God she actually changes this time. Also the three of them together could totally take James. Also Edward looking so sad at Bella leaving and promising to come get her once it's over is so sweet. I bet it's the smell from her dreams. James better not kill the twins and she should've woken them up instead of leaving them defensicless. I really do wish she cared more for her own safety and wasn't so self sacrificing.
GluttonyOfReading chapter 26 . 7/16/2024
Aww her pouting and Edward coming back to give her a forehead kiss was so cute. I wonder if he thought her growl was funny. I hope she's not still under the impression that Edward doesn't want her. I love Alice being Alice but a better Alice. I'm glad Jacob is with someone different and not Bella obsessed. Aww Edward worried she'll hey struck by lightning. I'm glad Edward listened to Bella about keeping them all together. Also I'm glad Bella gets pissed at being looked at as weak. I love how she showed off. I bet Edward looks hot in red. Edward winking is the best. I'm glad Bella is showing off. I love the Bella is competitive. Aww Edward and Bella staring at each other. Rose is a bit of a bitch. Throwing like that was just a bitch move. Well...
GluttonyOfReading chapter 25 . 7/16/2024
Aww Edward being there for her and scooping her up and saying no one will ever hurt her. I love that. She really needs to accept that he's coming and it means more than she's letting on. I'm glad she decided to tell Edward. Awww Edward nuzzleing Bella to make her feel better and his growling about her being in danger. So cute! Aww they're cuddling. Aww his kissed her hand! AWE! He kissed her cheek. She messed it up after though. His saying shell be the death of him is hilarious. Love that little moan she released and then told him that it was a good moan instead of a bad one. He's like a self satisfied cat leaning back with his arms behind his head.
GluttonyOfReading chapter 24 . 7/16/2024
I'm glad will is backing down and seems to be on the right path. Especially when he asked for small steps. It really shows he is trying. Also live Bella humor at the end of the last chapter saying Edward would rip off him arms and chuckling darkly along with Edward playfully growling. Hope rose gets her shit together because fuck her honestly. I hope Bella doesn't take roses shit and tells her just because she wants babies doesn't mean Bella does. Lol Addy asking for pudding. I love them playing around and Bella lifting him and Edward using his super speed. I'm glad Will is so excited. I wish this baseball game would go well but I think James will show up.
GluttonyOfReading chapter 23 . 7/16/2024
That's kinda rude that she asked Edward and then said she wasn't going. Yes! Shes going to get in his mind! Maybe then she'll see how much he likes her. Also hes so concerned for her and doesn't want her hurt. It's truely a tragedy that this doesn't have a sequal. I wish she didn't try to hide it from him about what she was doing. I'm glad she saw some of how he feels about her. Well her eyes at least. I certainly hope he’s on the right path and changes his attitude soon I always hated how Jacob was all bloodsucker this and bloodsucker that it was so old as if he wasn't a monster himself
GluttonyOfReading chapter 22 . 7/16/2024
I love Addy saying Edward won't bite and her waving at him and him waving back. I really hope they become vampires too. It's so interesting that Addys mother could heal. I hope they push themselves and unlock all the power. I really hope you'll make a sequal. I hope she quits making Edward feel even more dangerous or else hell push her away even more. Her crying about not being good enough for him was kinda sad but she just assumed that you know. I hope Addy knocks some sense into her and gives her some self worth so she's not so self sacrificing before she turns into a vampire. Awww Edward being there for Bella. Aww Edward wants to know about the vision. I bet he could smell her and that's why his voice was so strained because she wasn't paying him any attention. Also she's pushing him again especially with the touch. I'm glad she's doing something to make it easier or at least asking hopefully she sticks with it. Love that she used the space threads to keep him there but only playfully and he just signed and accepted it. She chicken out of what was going to be an EPIC kiss!
GluttonyOfReading chapter 21 . 7/16/2024
I love that she can startle him and that he was so worried for her. I'm so happy Edward is so excited to learn about Bella and is so amazed. Aww Edward taking her running. Also her slipping and saying that she kept up with him before. Also I love that he wasnt upset that she listened to his conversation he was just amazed. I love how they're racing! Im also stoked she asked him out to the dance. Edward just full stopping was hilarious. Although I do hope she let's him into her mind sometimes. I'm glad Alice finds it so funny and they're great friends. I love that she asks him questions with her kind. Also him grabbing her chin and saying he'd keep her safe made me want to kick my feet and close the app for a few second to compose myself lol. I love that she threw him out. I definitely like this Bella more. And Jasper saying bravo is the best. I hope she shows them time manipulation. I hope rose isn't so against bell adjust because have a human. I always hated that. Rose should really get that not everyone wants a baby. Also I hope Bella can control herself more than she did in the books when they tried for kissing. She constantly pushed him past what he was comfortable with and it honestly made me uncomfortable.
GluttonyOfReading chapter 20 . 7/16/2024
I'm glad Bella has her power back. I hope they talk to the Cullen's soon. Baseball must be the only sport played by supernatural people lol. Bella telling him that she knows what he eats is the best lol. Also I hope will backs off and stops causing problems and that he doesn't have any feelings for Bella. Edward telling Bella to be safe and then her stumbling and Edward laughing. I hope will backs off soon. I'm glad they'll push themselves till they find out there is no limit to their powers. It would be great to see them as vamps especially if will calmed down.
GluttonyOfReading chapter 19 . 7/16/2024
Of course Addy is excited about super human speed lol. Will is probably not. Bella and Addy teasing Will about his goatee is hilarious. I hope he's only protective over Bella because she's like a sister and not because he's got a crush. They are like family and I don't want it ruined. I hope it's just a brotherly thing. Oh no not will trying to make Edward jelly. I love that Alice is just willing to spill so they can move past this and is so amazed at what Bella knows.
GluttonyOfReading chapter 18 . 7/16/2024
Jasper feeling her and trying to bring her down was hilarious. I do love Jasper. I'm glad were seeing her use more of her powers. I already know the van will happen today. She slippe on the ice. I hope she uses her powers to not get crushed by the van. It's always nice when Bella saves herself and Edward gets taste of his own medicine with the "what are you" and ignoring thing. I'd like to see how shocked they would all be. I'm glad she used her own power. I wonder what Edward will say. I'm glad she saw more of what her power could be. Maybe she'll be that powerful as a vampire and use all the strings. I really wish there was a sequal. Also screw Edward for being so distrusing when she just said they both had secrets to keep and then painted her as someone who wouldn't be trusted because of the head injury. I'm glad the twins will be coming. FINALLY! Also once again screw the self sacrifice Edward refusing for her to be changed. Always pissed me off. I love that Will fought to protect her. I love them so much. I hope the twins go to forks. I love that Bella is relying on her friends for help and Edward being curious is so cute. I do hope they move to forks. And I love how concerned will is and that he fought for Bella even though it was so hard. Also them swooping down definitely make Edward think they were a threat to Bella. Awww Will saying he won't let Bella get hurt is the sweetest thing! I hope she gets her power back ASAP. I'm not one for her being weak when James comes. Addy saying that Bella couldn't possibly hog them all and wanting to be introduced is sweet. Also it's really sweet that even though Will wanted to leave he still found an apartment ASAP to be near Bella to help. World War three! Lol. Them talking and showing their powers is what I've been waiting for. Once again can I say how much I love Will? It's legit down the street. So sweet. And threatening Edward. I also think maybe Will could put up with it for the classes she has and maybe if he could sit with her at lunch. I wonder what the Cullen's will do.
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