Reviews for A Flash of Red
Leah chapter 1 . 6/2/2016
I liked it how you made a new position
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
That was excellent.
Dovahkiin101 chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
The first one was much better but I still liked this one. I was kind of glad that it was shorter so no one could catch them. I almost wished for zero to catch them though. THAT would have been embarrassing. XD
good chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
Everything was good until the end... I thought the end could use a twist. Otherwise it was pretty good
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2015
This was awsome you are a verry talented author im not gonna tell you my exact age but i will say that i am quite young and i know i shouldnt be reading stuff like this but i an and i would rate this a 11 out of 10 !
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
AAAAHHHH so kyut omg PLS make more pleeeaaaasssseee
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
so good and I am really happy thank you for making story is "AWESOME, and SEXY, and YOU KNOW IT".
someone 3 chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
it was awesome! I loved it really made me laugh at parts. :3 :) nice job (y)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
yukki kuran chapter 1 . 6/27/2014
omg the extra panties are a good idea omg i wonder why i never thought of than thank you now i can stop going to Victoria secret every Saturday and Sunday ugg its such a bother i make kaname buy my new underwear anyway but awesome i loved it your the best in getting a boy to hate reading thanks love your fanfic awesome
kitty kuran chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
good luck your a really good writer
Brittney Thomas chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Conversese chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
Write more. You left it hanging.
Sixhundred chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
Loved this one too! I feel Kaname's personality wasn't portrayed as well as in Flick Of The Tongue; he doesn't seem like the type of guy to make cheap, dirty jokes or wink at people, but overall you did a good job, especially in the kind of vocabulary he used. I also noticed you switched between past and present tense a few times - try to remember to stay consistent with which tense you're using.
You did an excellent job once again though and I'm really falling in love with your stories. :)
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