Reviews for Moment in Time
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
awe i loved this soo much great job it is perfect
blacktag189 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Excellent! Both angsty and heartbreaking longing, and yet incredibly romantic and hot. So very, very hot.

Love it! Thanks for sharing!
DarkSunshine24 chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
good job you should make it more that a one shot!
SaveMeNow chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
ok I'm not usually a reviewer BUT...

FINALLY! I have been looking for a good Mortal Intruments fic for ages.

Seriously amazing! This had pretty much everything I have been looking for and I'm now a little bit giddy!

Well Done you!
Scarlet Redd chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
I am speechless. I have no words to describe how I feel right now. That story was absolutely beautiful, and yet I feel at a loss of words. Deffenetly my fave story. I applaude you inmensely. Job well done!
my-heart-is-just-as-silent chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
That was so beautiful. I think you should continue it, write about how they can cope with "being" together. Maybe sneaking off around Alec and Isabelle...:) You're a good writer.
aenon chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
*tears* OMB! That was so beautiful! Like seriously i cried. it was perfect! There's no other way to explain it.

Bravo!
Evee9109 chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
OMG! Great story. Loved it.
IwishIwasinHale chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
WOW...This is wonderful!
Kathey27 chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
aw, Clary & Jace have always been one of my favorite pairs & this was beyond sweet :D
outsetislander chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
I loved this story. There's so much love and passion in it and it's very well written. I loved how it wasn't just some slutty lemon, but a real, beautiful story. Awesome job!
fireflycassie chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
eh,

I'd say so-so. The writing was well done, but I found the lemons very OOC and not really fitting for MI. I don't know, it just seemed very wimpy girl and huge hulking guy to me, if that makes any sense. Mary Sue-ish and Superman, if you will. Again, aside from the lemons I'd say lovely job. Maybe just work a little more on staying in character and such.
mylife9 chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
love it. I like how the feelings of lust are overwhelmed by the feelings of love. the beginning with the conflicting emotions and the middle with jace admitting his feelings and clary acknowledging her own. and the end witht hem both wanting to be together so they plan to run away. it's really romantic. thank you for writing this lovely story.
VEMV chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
love them... i just got city of glass today so i havent been able to read it but somehow i hope they can be with each other i was soo sad when i found out they were brother and sister :[ they are perfect for each other i like simon but not for clary
writer'sblock7777 chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
thumbs up!
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