Reviews for Temporary Good Bye
jerseyhalliwell chapter 10 . 1/14/2010
this is such a beautiful story! i hope you decide to continue one day!
xcgirl3 chapter 10 . 8/5/2009
i like your story line update soon!
Jade St. Jms chapter 10 . 7/30/2009
I can't wait to read more, I hope you update soon.
koumi11 chapter 10 . 7/16/2009
very nice... I am glad peyton is ok... I love your story but I think we are moving to fast... The story needs more details...

update soon please

PS. I want a brulian baby
Maiqu20 chapter 10 . 7/15/2009
loved it!
othlvr16 chapter 10 . 7/15/2009
great chapter. Loved it excited for what is to come
Maiqu20 chapter 9 . 7/6/2009
loved it!
koumi11 chapter 9 . 7/2/2009
nice... I am glad that Julian is getting better and that he and Jonathan are having some closure... I want a brulian baby:)

update soon please...
othlvr16 chapter 9 . 7/1/2009
Loved the ending.

Do I sense a proposal coming on?

Update soon.
koumi11 chapter 8 . 6/24/2009
nice... I am glad that Julian woke up...

please update soon
Maiqu20 chapter 8 . 6/23/2009
loved it!
OneTreeHill0983 chapter 8 . 6/23/2009
amazing story so far it is so good
BurningxRedxCaskett chapter 8 . 6/23/2009
omg! i'm so glad...i was seriously tearing up during brooke's speech...can't wait for the next update !
koumi11 chapter 7 . 6/18/2009
oh god... so great... loved it... update soon...

I hope that Julian is ok...
Angell4NEPatriots chapter 7 . 6/17/2009
Thank you for another wonderful update! I am going to try not to worry too much about the bad stuff that is going to happen since it is for the greater good of this amazing couple. I am all for the bad stuff as long as it makes them stronger together in the end. I am trusting you to take care of them though. LOL

I am encouraged that Jonathan notified Brooke of Julian's situation even though father and son are currently estranged. I can picture Brooke sinking to the ground at the news about the love of her life. That was a great visual!

I loved Sam answering the phone "Hi Mom!" That sounds perfect to me! It was sweet of Wes to agree to drive her. I am glad Sam has someone in her life as well! :) I also liked how Sam asked for reassurance from her mom that he was going to be alright. Her response was exactly what shuld have been said!

I enjoyed Brooke and Jonathan's first meeting even though it was under such intense conditions.

I loved how Sam referred to Julian as dad and admitted she had thought of him that way for awhile now! Once again this sounds perfect to me! I loved how Brooke told Sam that he loved her as well, he loved both of them and they WERE a family! Once again this sounds absolutely PERFECT to me! LOL Now we just need for it to officially happen! *hint, hint* :) I know, I am sure you are working on it! :)

I am relieved to read that Julian's injuries are not life threatening. Though I am concerned that he is still unconscious. I know sometimes that is a body's way of healing and I certainly hope that is the case in this situation.

I liked how Jonathan didn't keep Brooke or Sam away from his son. I am glad he knows that one day Brooke and Sam will be Julian's family legally and officially one day! He is being very considerate of them and I hope Julian appreciates that WHEN he wakes up. His father is trying and I hope they can mend whatever is keeping them from having a good relationship. Jonathan seems to really want a second chance, I hope both Julian and he get one.

I also really enjoyed how Jonathan promised to remain with Julian while Brooke went home to change. Again I am impressed with his thoughtful he is being with Brooke and Sam! I hope it continues that way!

I LOVED Brooke's parting words to Julian. I loved how she reminded him of his promise to always come back to her. He has never broken a promise to her yet and I am counting on him to honor his words. I can't wait for Brooke to nurse him back to health. I wonder what kind of patient he is going to be. LOL

I also like how Jonathan approves of Brooke and knows that he needs to come back to them! I agree...the SOONER the BETTER!

This was another awesome update! I am looking forward to seeing what happens next!
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