Reviews for Sonnet of Yearning
Sparky-hime chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
WOW. For a first attempt at poetry, that's really good! It's really beautiful and flowing, and it has an air of mystery, as is found in many (but not all) good poems. The way it's displayed and the feelings shown make it fit together well, so be confident, this is a great start to poetry! It brings out emotions really well... poor Natuto and Sasuke... Yeah, I'm just a wimp. Sorry!
mgsab123 chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
not bad