Reviews for Bijuu Children
Sam Ward chapter 14 . 8/16/2016
This is good will you be updating?
SPark681 chapter 14 . 1/29/2016
It seems Hidan pissed someone off hopefully this someone will end hidan once and for all anyways keep up the great work!
my 2 guys chapter 14 . 11/18/2015
that was good keep the chapters coming
guest chapter 4 . 5/8/2015
Point of view is really confusing in this story at times its not very clear who is talking or thinking what. Especially in this chapter.
ShadowBloodedge9396 chapter 14 . 4/14/2015
And more confusion that will hopefully be solved soon, lol.
Not much to say on this except nice touch of dark and near rape with the Hidan scene. You trying to vent or will that actually contribute to the plot? Maybe both?
The main confusion stems from...what does Naruto feel for Hinata? He keeps saying no when asked about loving her yet he keeps doing things like hugging her, comforting her, calling her his lavender love(unless that was from no editing from previous versions). Is he just leading her on to break her heart later?
That's all for now. Ja ne!
AyaValkyrie chapter 14 . 4/12/2015
Ohhh interesting... Hope he cuts his ... Off. I hate rapists as well.
Cerulean Knight chapter 14 . 4/12/2015
So very interesting the way this is turning out. Naruto learning from Gouki and all, gotta wonder if he'll learn the other side though. Also wondering/hoping to see other street fighter characters-like my girl Cammy White, she fucking rocks-
Hm, wonder who found Hidan.
michumichu79 chapter 14 . 4/12/2015
WOWWW UN CAP BUENISIMO PLISSSS ACTUALIZAR TAN PRONTO PUEDAS. PLISSSS QUE EL HAREM NO SE TAN GRANDE, NI MUJERES MAYORES ME ENCANTA TU FIC HASTA AHORA ES BASTANTE ORIGINAL FELICIDADES BYEEEE. I LOVE NARUHINA, GAAHINA AND ITAHINA!
SurvivalHorror chapter 14 . 4/12/2015
Good chapter but... uh... this is the 3rd time you're posted chapter 14
Kego66 chapter 14 . 4/12/2015
you updated the same chapter again...
ThatCrazyBrit94 chapter 14 . 4/12/2015
Did you just repost the same chapter as before? Dick move bro, dick move.
Guest chapter 14 . 4/12/2015
you updated today but what did you update chapter 14 still looks the same as yesterday
Guest chapter 14 . 4/11/2015
That fight scene between Naruto and Goki was incredible.
thor94 chapter 14 . 4/11/2015
really good chapter.
naruto kicked neji ass, and hiashi is a really good guy.
hidan is cruel bastard.

ask who is the guy in the shadow spying iwa and jiraya.
one of naruto clones?
i'am lost about kyuubi his name is goki or kurama? both name appear in this story.
Guest chapter 13 . 3/31/2015
Web - Mercenary Of Mercenaries, get off of god-shadowex100 nuts you loser.
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