Reviews for For Pity's Sake
Dontgotaclue88 chapter 4 . 2/1/2012
Awwww! . I really liked this.
notwritten chapter 4 . 3/6/2011
Interesting reading. Keep smiling. :-)
notwritten chapter 3 . 12/29/2009
This was very interesting to read. Keep smiling. :-)
Wai-Jing Waraugh chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Haha, nice start! Particularly like this line:

"An eyeless fish could see that!"

Brilliant! That should become everday useage! It's so nonsensical, yet so damn sensical at the same time!

I like your OC, although poor Jamie hasn't done anything much yet, except invited our sympathy. Hm. I detect a subtle similarity between the names 'Jamie' and 'Jareth'. This could prove interesting. It's nice to have a story that doesn't focus just on Jareth and Sarah, or Jareth's other romantic exploits, and it's very nice to see him genuinely caring about certain charges among the scores of brats he has to put up with.

Keep it up - this is shaping up just fine! I very much enjoy your writing style, it has a rare bit of flair to it.