|Reviews for A New Beginning, A Better Ending|
| paperhearts101 chapter 3 . 10/5/2009
OMG! finish the story! I loved it! please finish it!
| BananaFace12 chapter 3 . 8/15/2009
( write more! write more! i like this story
| plzdon'tuse chapter 3 . 7/23/2009
this was gr8
| NeverAlone3665 chapter 3 . 7/23/2009
cool story! Hey, do you know the author of the poem?
| MidDusk chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
This poem is awosome. I love things like this.:) Sorry sometimes I can be bad with words.
| ChelzXcorE chapter 3 . 5/19/2009
This is really good. :]
The only thing is that Jonah really has blue eyes, not brown. But other than that this rawks so far! X3
| cuthuluextreame chapter 3 . 5/19/2009
oh, I actually like this story, at first I was sceptical but I'm glad I gave it a chance. oh and there's just one thing that's bugging me, Jonah has really blue eyes, not brown, sorry if that's annoying but screwed up facts make me twich especially on Haunting in Connecticut... _''