|Reviews for Looking up at Lurch|
| DexterzShadow chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
At first I wasn't sure about the perspective, but at the end I was beyond pleasantly surprised. Awesome Job!
| dragon dressage chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
You have a really great idea here, and a nice writing style. However, I'm not sure second person view really works for this story. At first, I almost started picturing a hooker as "you" instead of Cooper. I really liked how you waited till the end to reveal the identity of "you," though.
If you have the time or interest, I'd really encourage you to rewrite this story in first person or maybe 'distant' third, as I like to call it, where the identity of the POV isn't given right away (just using he, him, etc). Just play with it a little.
Overall, good job. I hope you keep writing!