|Reviews for Without the Time Machine|
| Harmony chapter 10 . 8/1
I found this story a while back and just found it again. Just reread up to here. The plot is a damn good one. Adding Bardock and Tarble and with Piccolo being alive, then merging with Kami, really nice. The battles are pretty good, loved the Abo and Cado fight. The Androids, Cell, and Hirudegarn, sounds like a handful. Will Gohan reunite with Trunks and the other heroes? Questions: Will Tarble and Bardock manage to become Super Saiyans? Will Trunks manage to reach the Ascended Super Saiyan state? (The Form Vegeta and Trunks used against Cell). Does the Hyperbolic Time Chamber even still exist in this timeline? If so will it be used? Could they possibly find more allies, like maybe a warrior from Namek being sent to help, or something? That's all the questions I have for now. This is a very badass story. I hope you continue it whenever you get the time or inspiration. Peace.
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/14/2015
| Orion96 chapter 10 . 9/26/2014
Excellent plot, a nice combination of what-if scenarios happening, I loved how you meshed everything together so far. The action scenes are definitely not lacking in detail.
Describing the environments the characters are in is pretty good as well.
Good luck with this whenever you continue this.
I have a suggestion, I know this is on hiatus, but. Creating a rivalry between one or two of the heroes would add more drama and action to the story. Just an idea. Good-bye for now.
| Flash4eva chapter 10 . 9/24/2014
I'm totally enjoying this, I hope you continue this soon.
I'm sure you'll find inspiration somehow.
| Flash4eva chapter 9 . 9/24/2014
Hell yeah! Gohan's finally seeing some action!
| Flash4eva chapter 8 . 9/24/2014
Nice battle; the heroes have two threats down and they still have the threats of the androids, Cell, and Hirudegarn to deal with.
I must say this is an impressively well put together story
| Flash4eva chapter 7 . 9/24/2014
This is pretty radical; you're doing great with the fight scenes.
I wonder who ends killing Abo and Cado, will it be Piccolo or Bardock?
Will Trunks survive his scuffle with Cell?
I love you're cliffhangrs
| Flash4eva chapter 6 . 9/24/2014
I loved the character portrayals in this chapter.
The action wasn't too bad either
| Flash4eva chapter 5 . 9/24/2014
Nice introduction of Cell; he's still a vicious dude even in that timeline.
I wonder what happened to Gohan
| Flash4eva chapter 4 . 9/24/2014
This was a neat chapter
| Flash4eva chapter 3 . 9/24/2014
Amazing job my friend! This was a great fight!
| Flash4eva chapter 2 . 9/24/2014
Yes, the suspense is building and who could be waiting for them?
When will Bardock meet the others?
| Flash4ever chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
This is radical; Bardock and Tarble are in this!
Trunks won't be alone in the fight to save the earth, awesome!
What happened to Gohan though
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
Aye skunt, when yo gon update moddarant. This fucking story is amazing that's the truth niggaz
| super broly fan chapter 5 . 11/3/2013
i bet gohan was absorbed by cell and how will tunks bardock tapion and tarble defeat cell and will piccolo and kami wake up from there coma.