|Reviews for Walking the Line|
| FalleratFreddys chapter 1 . 10/6
This sounds awfully lot like the story "O Mine Enemy"
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/8
Why did you stop! KEEEP GOING PLEASE! Why would you stop !
| Fezzes Are Red chapter 17 . 6/4
This is really good and I really like it and you're an amazing writer and oh mygah UPDATE
| Sarah chapter 17 . 6/2
Please update. I know it's been like ages but there's no point starting and not finishing -
| Sarah chapter 1 . 5/27
I know it's been a while but hardly any of the fanfics on here have been finished and it's frustrating because they are very good and exciting, I was looking forward to every next chapter until I knew they weren't going to be finished. There amazing so if your not gonna finish them don't write them
| daisycb chapter 17 . 3/17
please finish this. Don't leave this great story up in the air. Who gets to Potter and Snape first?
| hunteresse chapter 17 . 2/28
Wow! I only just found this story, but it's great! I really hope you decide to continue it; it looks like a long road before Severus and Harry really understand one another. I'll keep an eye out, just in case you decide to pick up the pen again. :)
| Thorn D. Cinni chapter 17 . 12/23/2014
So... Big cliffhanger. And you stopped. Meanie.
| Thorn D. Cinni chapter 14 . 12/22/2014
Hmm... I wonder if they remember that Snape's wand is snapped and in the hands of the Order.
| whitehound chapter 17 . 12/18/2014
Ah, this is really well done, very well written and convincing - I'm sorry there isn't more of it.
| chickens chapter 17 . 12/8/2014
This is fantastic!
| Snily4evr chapter 1 . 11/4/2014
I hope that you update soon. This story is one of THE BEST fics that I have ever read!
| Inkie Teapot chapter 17 . 10/19/2014
I love your fic. Your charcterisations are good. I never get the feeling that the characters do or say something that their cannon counterpart wouldn't. And I like how you avoid falling into the pitfalls other authors do (though maybe that's intended). Frankly, I'm sick of Harry being portrayed as a weak puppy that's socially impaired due to the abuse it's suffered and Snape as either way to kind or way to evil. So, I'm grateful whenever I find a fic that has realistic characterisations.
Harry and Snape fleeing in a stolen car with Harry driving ... that's a great mental picture. I can practically see Snape swaying back and forth with every curve Harry does, holding his stomach and muttering obscenities under his breath. Meanwhile Harry's preoccupied with the street, narrowly avoiding cars and ignoring their drivers, who're shouting for someone to stop that madman.
Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm really curious what's going to happen next in Harry and Snape's journey.
| stephanD chapter 17 . 9/7/2014
Awesome story. Snape and Harry are in a right mess. I don't know if you get reviews after all this time but thought it worth the effort to let you know your story telling ability is top notch!
| Guest chapter 17 . 9/6/2014
Last chapter read. Last updated 2011.