|Reviews for Madness|
| Aisha chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
| Wolvess chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
OMG please write moree i love this story :)
| Boundless Sky chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
umm why did it change from maya to jessica?
| Ohioan0897 chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
I'm sorry but the daddy bit was just too much for me... other than that it was awesome! I don't usually read OC ones either. Try to use diffrerent words rather than the same ones over and over. It will help keep the reader from getting bored.
| blackfoxofevil chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Well done! Well done! I like it! D The ending is much better then the begining with the details and chronological order. The very last statement of which Hidan speaks gives the idea of a cliff hanger, or if there is going to be more to the story like one shot that one person may see or hear about in the near furture. How about someting else that you could right with this? It would be intresting to see it turn into a series!
Other then that it is good. Much better then that first time I read it.
| firewolf025 chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
that was awesome, really showed hidan's evil side. shame you only did one chapter i kind of wanna know why the akatsuki have her