Great start!
Would've loved to read more. I hope you get a chance to finish it :) :)

Wow! This is a great start! I hope you find some time to work on this again someday. Well done!

This was really starting to kick ass.
Please come back

This is fantastic! I'd love to see where you were going with this!

This is really good! Can't wait for your next installment! :D

I really, really, really hope you update soon! :)

Was wondering if this story was going to ever get updated? I enjoyed the first 3 chapters.

i love the way you have taken things. it seems like everyone has their own specific take on how season 3 will go..i really enjoyed yours!

Great story, I was thinking about a similar storyline and am very anxious to see where you're going to go with it. I think this might be an actual storyline we see next season. Too bad we have to wait until March to find out! Can't wait for chapter four!

I enjoyed this last chapter _ I see you are setting up!

So would Roark's death hinder their whole 20 mil thing?

update soon!

"You mean that show with Scott Bakula?" Brilliant. I love your geekdom salutes, and you seem to have a lurking A-plot. Keep up the good work. And do I sense a repurposing of the Burbank Buymoria property? Can't wait to see more. Loved it.

I find it pretty good so far

Oh boy, great idea and name for the company ; )

I like how you are building up for the action to follow. Nice start to your story. Thanks!

Operation Canton! Got to love Firefly!