Reviews for Empty seat
applepielover chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
This is a cute oneshot, even with the sadness. I like the switching of POVs and the imagery. Nicely written.


"He had looked so tin between them, so fragile." thin.

"Trough she knew that he was strong and safe, she still had been very worried that he was going to get hurt and she was right." though.

"Her body was warming up even more that she had done after the two first feathers was returned and it seemed that she gained more heat after every feather." more than.

“any memories of you will never come back….your price…never come back….price…never…" Any should be capitalized and there should be a quotation mark at the end.
Big Kitty chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Aww! This scene always makes me cry. :*(

This is really good, especially for your first time writing in English.

Nice job!