Reviews for Holding My Breath
SimplyMe51 chapter 16 . 3/12
Fantastic story, incredibly well written. I remember, when I first watched the episode, wondering why everyone agreed to let Daniel go so easily.

Now I've gotta go read the sequel. Thanks for sharing your work and please keep writing!
Seren Maris chapter 16 . 8/30/2010
I love it! Amazing story. I especially like all the intrigue. :)
dwelian chapter 16 . 10/3/2009
Awesome story! Looking forward to the sequel. Thanks for sharing!
Alys5 chapter 16 . 8/27/2009
Good story, looking forward to the sequel.
Eilidh17 chapter 16 . 8/24/2009
Fantastic! I can not wait for Letting Go, but in the mean time we still have Best Intentions to read!
fantasdancer chapter 16 . 8/24/2009
Good missing scenes story. And very well written too. Hope your

LETTING GO story comes out soon. This one didn't really finish with the issues presented in the earlier chapters of Jack so focussed on the military needs of the SGC and not on his team, ignoring their skills and contributions to the point of having contempt for Daniel
CountryPixie chapter 16 . 8/24/2009
Wonderful, wonderful story! I'm really looking forward to the sequel.
momof6 chapter 16 . 8/24/2009
can't wait to read letting go.
Talzin chapter 16 . 8/24/2009
An enjoyable read there.

Looks like you had a sentence going missing in the "Summit - No Safety" part: "his Hlditrying to still"
Zuzanny chapter 16 . 8/23/2009
o.m.g.

I'm biting my nails for Letting Go now.
JAJJAJ chapter 16 . 8/23/2009
Another good chapter! I'm happy you are going to update Best Intentions, but I'm really sorry we have to wait for the continuation of this one!

J.
starjems88 chapter 16 . 8/23/2009
cant wait for 'letting go' :)
Jeanny chapter 15 . 7/16/2009
Really enjoying the way you weave new content into this episode. Your characterizations are quite delicious too. Hope for more soon!
Zuzanny chapter 15 . 7/15/2009
what happens next? Will Osiris come for Daniel?
JAJJAJ chapter 15 . 7/12/2009
What a very intense chapter! Yu was chillingly evil, and Daniel's emotions were so vivid. That he almost released the poison to save himself from Yu, and his shame that he would do so just to save himself, was a very nice touch. Daniel is human, after all, not a saint and not superman.

J.
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