Reviews for Lathering Up
robsessed1123 chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
LadyAstor chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
SMeyer would never approve. Which means you did an excelent job! HAWT
twilightmom1 chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
That was hot!
apricot817 chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Wow. That was hawt!
lc chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
omg that was amzing i have never read anything like but i think i jsut found my new favorite type writters that was crazy i want ot go find my hubby and tear his off
twilightfanbbzxoxo chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
yh bbz, dis wuz rli gud & rli dttaild. lve it babeygal. bt bbz, nly 1 cn dream rit?
keyecullen chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Read this a couple of days ago and forgot to review. If Edward was in my shower I would jump him no questions asked! Loved reading this tidbit! Edward is welcome at my house anytime!

Bellaswan13 chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Hey girl!

A smokin' hot story ;) M I love r Patz what boom ting. However in my opinion your prose is lacking structure and your semantic field falls into disarray I recommend reviewing your textual structure and wider reading of classical prose before continuing your writing. I think you should explore use of sibilance and your metaphors fall into cliche. ;)

loveedward chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
hot hot so hot
Nikki chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
Loved it...
Jerzygirlz chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Loved this! If only all showers were this way..!~sigh! I am off to share this with everyone I are there any other "rooms" there could do this in...
isabellamariecullen123 chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
i loved this!
Azrael Abbadon chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
I LOVE IT! Ive read it more than 10 times and i send it to every of my friends! one of the bests! do u have more stories like this one?
midnightriver123 chapter 1 . 12/30/2009

why can't all showers be that fun? xD
Vampire lover chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
I have 1 word! WOW!
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