Reviews for Tradition and Honor: A Devil's Creed
ROBERT chapter 2 . 7/27
when he had get back soon he was out shop for Kin and Tayuya soon get them new stuff like ninjas suits blue and red mix for Kin and tayuya had black suit and vest and t shit now, and each girl is living in a slaves bed room now both had twin size beds and blanks now, the 2 had ex head band into the end now and some time the bed rooms is quit too, when then the helping on the clan houses unit now, and them own house unit now , red and blue one , when get to his offices into it is sun lights home when his keeping mob money and gold bars now, on the wall is s class bad guys and women like now, some form the lands of mist and others out of slaves a evil city he took out and his get a other slave girl a oviler and blond hire girl and she is now working with him now, she had a home on the 3 floor now, bed room and siting room now,
ROBERT chapter 1 . 7/4
when both girls of the sound is now his slaves and with it now his buying new clothers for them now kin is into blue and mix white when the other is red and gold mix , when then workings on the home was good took on the owner own bed room and office too, when the living is next and then off to the outside now doing the out side gust homes sun and moon lights homes and the house of fall home when his keeping the men cave room now bar and others stuff too no the wall is big bods girls and women like now with it a pool table and and some time is other bed room now , his keeping for his own now, when one time Temari had come here to meeting him here and sex nights was hot then summer and it was good , too, when into the days his buy out a were house his made into the fox nights no go inc a body huters inc and the gray men inc a mob money and gold bars and others stuff too, his had on for long times stuff too,
lara5170 chapter 3 . 5/20
Isn't he still 12?
lara5170 chapter 1 . 5/20
Interesting until he decided to change his name and Temari became a fangirl.
Guest chapter 12 . 3/3
It's good but it could be better... The ending was rushed to say the least, it's like the the whole world end was downplayed to an extreme level... Maybe the lack of description on the fight scene made it insufficient. I do have to say I like the premise of the story although it should've been expounded more so that the story seems more complete.
guest hater101 chapter 1 . 2/23
Lol chapter 1 . 2/12
VF, all of your fics are badly written trash, and this is no exception. You are the living definition of quantity over quality
SpikedTankedmaster300 chapter 2 . 1/21
Will you return to this story?
ROBERT chapter 2 . 12/3/2021
when KIN and TAYUYA had both sleeping in bed with VERGIL KUN for when now and both had get some hot fire now with him and his time with them both was good too, when get to find some cub size slaves bed rooms to the east wing now , and both had them former sound ninjas head band on the desk now and when KIN had her blue and wather suit now and other had red and green now, when get to get the home now , seeing the owner office now , team pic on the desk with others too,
Mikeblade chapter 9 . 8/22/2021
them telling her they will have there way on this matter is treason and they should have been killed right then and there
Mikeblade chapter 5 . 8/22/2021
you do know that hinata is the first to marry outside of her clan if she was not there would be other familys in the village that have people with the same eyes and bloodline but there is not witch means they where a full on incest family
YeagerMeister31 chapter 12 . 6/25/2021
Well, that was a nice ending poor Jiraiya though but oh well.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 11 . 6/24/2021
Well, that was interesting so the other Akatsuki members must be dead then or in Hidan's case buried alive maybe who knows now it's the fight with Mundus should be interesting.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 10 . 6/23/2021
Damn, that was pretty awesome Yagura's dead huh and he's got a new weapon a Trident nice and also a nice Omake also.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 9 . 6/22/2021
Well, damn that was awesome several retards are dead sux about Sakura her being my fav female but she can't be a good character all the times she seemed like a total bitch in this story so I guess she got what she deserved.
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