|Reviews for The Protectors|
| billyvmom chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
I like it so far. I am not a fan of Nahuel Jacob Nessie triangles though.
| BlackTreaderWolf chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
| coheed cutie chapter 9 . 6/22/2010
im sorry but i have to give up on this story the oc is killing me you should keep writing but you should try to stay truer to the books and more in character
| coheed cutie chapter 5 . 6/22/2010
i like this story but the characters are way to oc and it bothers me but you are really good at writing and i really want to get the rest of the plot but if it wasnt for that i would have given up on this story after i read that thing with charlie and nessie
| FeliciaCullen01 chapter 19 . 1/1/2010
Its really good. cant wait for the next chapter. i cant wait to see what happens to Renesmee
| Vampirebiter chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
I LIKE IT. ITS CUTE.
| sharon77 chapter 3 . 1/1/2010
okay that chapter was really good and Im sorry that your frezzing its not even 60 here.! Ha Ha!
| sharon77 chapter 2 . 1/1/2010
your second chapter was super descriptive and I felt like I was there. I feel bad for Nessie cause she doesn't know whats up with Jake.
| sharon77 chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
okay hands down that was the best story ive read on here (so far)! I cant wait to read more!
| lor chapter 17 . 12/31/2009
That was good, although, i didn't like the part where seth nearly raped nessie... that was a little weird, and i understand that you were in a weird mood, so it's totally fine..
anyway, i like you're story, its very original, and unique.
| Daniella chapter 16 . 12/4/2009
| Elizabeth chapter 16 . 12/4/2009
Wow! Really great story! A bit graffic at the beginning, but other than that, its great! Keep writing!
| lor chapter 16 . 11/17/2009
I like it!
you should update soon!
HEHEHE in heat!
| Garnet chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
The run-on sentences... are eating... my brain. GRAMMAR IS YOUR FRIEND!
| leydyan22 chapter 15 . 10/31/2009
interesting! i'm a callwater fan.