Reviews for The Protectors
billyvmom chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
I like it so far. I am not a fan of Nahuel Jacob Nessie triangles though.
BlackTreaderWolf chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Good
coheed cutie chapter 9 . 6/22/2010
im sorry but i have to give up on this story the oc is killing me you should keep writing but you should try to stay truer to the books and more in character
coheed cutie chapter 5 . 6/22/2010
i like this story but the characters are way to oc and it bothers me but you are really good at writing and i really want to get the rest of the plot but if it wasnt for that i would have given up on this story after i read that thing with charlie and nessie
FeliciaCullen01 chapter 19 . 1/1/2010
Its really good. cant wait for the next chapter. i cant wait to see what happens to Renesmee
Vampirebiter chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
I LIKE IT. ITS CUTE.
sharon77 chapter 3 . 1/1/2010
okay that chapter was really good and Im sorry that your frezzing its not even 60 here.! Ha Ha!
sharon77 chapter 2 . 1/1/2010
your second chapter was super descriptive and I felt like I was there. I feel bad for Nessie cause she doesn't know whats up with Jake.
sharon77 chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
okay hands down that was the best story ive read on here (so far)! I cant wait to read more!
lor chapter 17 . 12/31/2009
That was good, although, i didn't like the part where seth nearly raped nessie... that was a little weird, and i understand that you were in a weird mood, so it's totally fine..

anyway, i like you're story, its very original, and unique.
Daniella chapter 16 . 12/4/2009
Loving it!

Really great!
Elizabeth chapter 16 . 12/4/2009
Wow! Really great story! A bit graffic at the beginning, but other than that, its great! Keep writing!
lor chapter 16 . 11/17/2009
I like it!

you should update soon!

HEHEHE in heat!
Garnet chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
The run-on sentences... are eating... my brain. GRAMMAR IS YOUR FRIEND!
leydyan22 chapter 15 . 10/31/2009
interesting! i'm a callwater fan.
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