|Reviews for And We Are All Going to Fall|
| PennyOfTheWild chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
-my God: this was beautiful.
| KosmicKhaos chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
This is beautiful, You can feel the emotion in it especially at the end, the sheer fact of knowing your village gave you away to your murders on a silver plater, it hysterical in a sense.
| Mononoke-hime x sukai kurora chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
This was the best one-shot of Utakata yet. I felt horrible when he died. This was wonderful.
| Full Moon Howl chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
so sad! Great job though!
| SmilingArtist chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
This is a really great one-shot! :3
Did you know that the anime producers are going to make a filler about Utakata? o.O
| Darkamaru chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
a great story. not too many about the off-screen jinchuurikis but this one is certainly good.*nods*
perfect papercut-how about an Utakata X Konan fic?like maybe before they took out rokubi, they fell in love?
| Le Duele La Cabeza chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
This is really sad and really good. Wow, I love it! Utakata was probably my favorite of the Jinchuriki that didn't get placed in the story. But, serioiusly, this is amazing! ]
| Mona Ryder chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
Wow, this was amazing I have to say. That and I agree with you completely. Utakata is the COOLEST of the Jinchuuriki (Right before Gaara of course) and I am super happy that you wrote this story.
I've been trying to find stuff about Utakata that Masashi Kishimoto may have told people. (Narutopedia has some info on his personality, but I kind of find and site ending in pedia to be unreliable).
The only thing I have EVER found other than what Bijuu he had was that his personality was supposedly 'charming'. But everyone finds different stuff 'charming'. (I personally think he would be a Ren kind of charming. (Ren is from the anime Hell Girl/Jigoku Shoujo) but maybe that's just the similar hairstyles talking. Who knows.)
I am planning on a few stories that will involve Utakata and I was wondering on who you think would be good paired with him. (I'm not anti-yaoi, I just can't write it to save my life. So a girl would be nice.) I was actually thinking about Sakura since she knows Naruto and Gaara, she more sympathetic to Jinchuuriki.
Anyways, sorry for the long review, just had to state what I thought.
| Hiding In My Writing chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
I was charmed by Utakata at first sight as well. Thank you for writing about him. I loved it and hope you keep it up!
| korel.c chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Good to see someone else from Singapore writing.
I like it. It's painfully poignant and rather vague, which reflects everything most people know about the other bijuu. This should really get a little more recognition.
The bracketed extra comments are delightful. However, you may want to either proofread before you post or check your story while you're writing - there are at least three, four typos even now, and in a quality work this short they stand out like flashing lights.
But keep up the writing. Heh, based on this I expect much good fic to come, eh?
| Flame05 chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
This is so sad. TT
| laurelsblue chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
The Rokubi Jinchuuriki is sexy and I'm really glad you decided to write about him.
I like the fact that he actually was treated fairly well by his village.
Just one thing though. The Akatsuki wear cloaks, not clocks despite the amusing mental image.