Reviews for Distractions
rubell chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
lol...
rubell chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
lol...
Moonlight Isabella Silverstein chapter 2 . 6/11/2010
That was good. I think you should post your other story. What is the name?
JosieVamp chapter 2 . 1/3/2010
You should give a gigantic warning when your stories should be read in private! LOL! I think I need a cold shower...
hopeless-bad-ass-romantic chapter 2 . 9/22/2009
OH u should TOTALLY pick it back up again! and keep writting! that would b AWSOME! ;-P
So Wrong It's Amber chapter 2 . 6/23/2009
good
The Novelist in Training chapter 2 . 6/19/2009
so that's how they come in. . . um. . .wow
The Novelist in Training chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
how do bell n edward tie into this?
SaDiddy-Baby chapter 2 . 5/22/2009
awesome
Chimaera2009 chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
This was a bold premise, and I enjoyed it. I like how the story portrayed Alice. She's such a rock star! Her boldness in the bedroom goes right along with her character. Well done!

Make sure to start a new paragraph when you change speakers or points of view. That can be confusing for the reader (example in the eighth paragraph of chapter 1), however you got it down pat almost the whole time.
lazer16 chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
uber kewl review siany and rachy :)very well described and thought into :) you must do some more but get them more sexual active :P lmao

also if you want any notes nd help with any of your new stories feel free to ask thanks :)
BlaiseLynn chapter 2 . 5/17/2009
Jeez, their all Alice must be Bi...Where Jasper go while Edward and Alice were doing Bella?

And i can only imagine the 'fun' Edward, Alice, AND Jasper[ahh i love Jasper!] were having...
the-glory-days chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I'm gonna have to agree with another reviewer-you guys are teases, dirty little teases! _
Britty Bee chapter 2 . 5/17/2009
you should so do a bella and jasper, can't wait to read it
Yukiko T chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
wow that's very interestingXD go on I'm looking forward to a new chapter.
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