Reviews for Visible Cracks
Kateri1 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Nice little missing scene. Love it
Silvergrass chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
wow it was great!
DoveFeathersAndSnowFlurries chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
really good, loved it!
GreenEyes09 chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
great story.
Zee Viate chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
That was very good how the 'little voice' compared their situations and especially the answer at the end.
Deluded Visions chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
Fantastic! This is very well written, I can just see this running through Tony's head.