Reviews for Saved
Adriana chapter 7 . 11/4/2009
Sage Londyn chapter 5 . 5/8/2009

I loved it. You're really doing a great job with this story.

Can't wait for chapter 6!


Amy90 chapter 5 . 5/8/2009
Wow: MUCH tension/ big attraction between them... And Bobby's always the suspicious father... :D

I like it very much!

Only, when you're writing Dean's thoughts from Dean's point of view (reported speech, stream of consciousness, or whatever it is called), forget about the "I mean" and the "I guess" - otherwise it kind of catapults the reader back into reality because it reminds you of the fact that there's a narrator who can comment.

Anyways: I hope you won't be able to resist. ;o)
Sage Londyn chapter 4 . 5/6/2009
great job!

i enjoyed readign them very much!

cant wait for the next chapter



Amy90 chapter 4 . 5/5/2009
Bobby as a protective father? :D I think he's going to have his hands full - I'm wondering whether Dean even dares to admit he likes her outfit? Can't wait for the next chapter!
deansgirl1 chapter 3 . 5/4/2009
can't wait to read soon.
Riley Baragon chapter 3 . 5/3/2009
Dean was very well written. And I really liked Bobby, he does seem like the overly protective father type!
Riley Baragon chapter 2 . 5/3/2009
This story is really good. Can't wait to read more! _