Reviews for Jacob and Bella forever
Taylorlautnerismine13 chapter 8 . 6/19/2011
Wow no offense but this is really crappy It has no substance no plot it's almost like an actual twilight book anyway here are some of my suggest the story line is good but you should elaborate more explain things further try and think of each chapter as an entire story develop the characters further make them your own that's what fanfiction is all about making exactly what you wanted to happen in the story happen hope this helps and I hope you didn't think I was being to rude
JACKI3.Z chapter 13 . 11/2/2010
loved the story! can't wait to read part two :)
ColourMeChaos chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
Gal, like WOAH. Loved it. A lot. ;) (L)
edwardlover1918 chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
col writing
adamamy425 chapter 12 . 1/19/2010
Interesting take on Jacob and Bella with him imprinting on her.
Anon chapter 13 . 12/30/2009
Nice cute little story, now going on to read the sequel. Thanks
ZeilaZ chapter 13 . 11/21/2009
i love this story can't wait to read the sequel
battle at arizona chapter 11 . 10/7/2009
aw very very good girl!
battle at arizona chapter 10 . 10/7/2009
aw that was so sad/sweet! again, really great.
battle at arizona chapter 9 . 10/7/2009
aw poor Jake! loved the chappie though!
battle at arizona chapter 8 . 10/7/2009
oh nice!
battle at arizona chapter 7 . 10/6/2009
Very good! I'm glad Edward's gone!
battle at arizona chapter 5 . 10/6/2009
aww it wasn't boring! I loved it.. very sweet :)
battle at arizona chapter 4 . 10/6/2009
Again, very good! I absolutley love Jacob.. he is so sweet in this fic! :)
battle at arizona chapter 3 . 10/6/2009
WOW really awesome! you write very very good!
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