Reviews for The burden
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Aw! So sad! This was good! I always thought about that, too, when watching this ep! *U* Rock on!
Kosaten no Kokinatsuyosa chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
I think you've done an excellent job with this concept. A good number of writers have attempted it, but you are an excellent writer, and have kept Antauri IC quite well.
Netbug-Archive chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Awwwwwww 8(

Anyways, I like the concept of this! Although, sometimes it didn't feel like Antauri was the one narrating with some of the vocabulary choices.

All the same, nicely done. :)
Fastern chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Amazing. I've never even thought about that before. I see one or two spelling/grammar errors. (i.e. "He said it so surprised" should be "He said it so surprisingly.") This really brings some depth into Antauri...and to the others, frankly. 4/5.