Reviews for Until I Die He Will Not Leave My Side
The Third Biker Scholar chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
simple, yet powerful. loved this.
Alyssa Halliwell chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
Aw, this was really sweet. I love how Merlin's staying strong to help Arthur
quaint.camera chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
*clutches chest*

My, this is beautiful. The language is so vivid and descriptive and Merlin's emotions and observations are all very believable-so much that it makes the reader ache for Merlin almost as much as he aches for Arthur.

I do wonder what happened to make Arthur so upset... I agree him acting so lifeless would be scarier than him getting angry, as Merlin points out. Nice job. I would love to see an explanation, although it's excellent as a stand-alone as well. :)
Kat Nightfox chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
This was really beautiful. Haunting and sad but utterly beautiful. Thank you.
PhoenixWytch chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
So sad.

Thank you for writing.
stundenglas chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
Damn, this is so touching. I love it!
MakotoJinx chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
Aw! Such raw emotion. Merlin is a guardian angel. Your writing style is beautiful!
Dradminton chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
Beautiful! You captured into words the emotion perfectly.
BlueSpottedDog chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Aw, that was sweet. And silence is golden! :)
Acheron Blake chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
this is such a sweet story. I love it. It's full of emtion and love and care. Long Live Camelot!
CxXxDarkWolf5xXxD chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
This is a lovely well written.:( poor a good job hes got merlin.
petrelli heiress chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Sweet, sad abd beautiful. I think you've done a great job. Simply marvelous. Sniffles.
allhailjinora chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
This is so heartbreaking, but that's what makes it beautiful. Uther died, I'm guessing. Perhaps in battle, hence all the bruises and wounds. And someone else's blood would be Uther's too. I'm probably wrong since there isn't any of the worry of becoming king in here, but, I think this would be about the shock and grieving. Faved x
melon-heart chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
It's lovely and everything a good oneshot should be, just a little snippet of emotion and atmosphere, I think you captured it beautifully. I totally sighed at the end of it, one of those big embarrassing cliche girl sighs and I'm only admitting it because the internets are anonymous a because you deserve to know how much I enjoyed this.