Reviews for His Saving Grace
xJacb chapter 4 . 3/21/2019
While I read the rant in one of the early chapters, I still find difficulty in understanding why you used the Dragon Ball characters, like what was the point? You didn't even keep their last names the same, the bullies could've been Sharpener and other minor characters from the show, and there is no relation whatsoever to the actual characters. You could literally have just replaced the character names with any other and the stoey would function as normal. While this is indeed the purpose of an AU story, I really don't get why you didn't just write the stoey with other names and just post it as a standalone story somewhere. Well written, but an odd choice of characters if you ask me
Petunia132 chapter 6 . 2/29/2016
It's amazing. I read this story over four years ago, and I couldn't even remember the name of it to come back for it. Thank goodness for your ending of this story, because remembering it allowed me to find your story again. It's still just as wonderful from when I first read it, and I'm so glad I was able to come back and read it.
ssj7chibividel chapter 21 . 1/12/2014
My god... Halo came on on the radio as i just began reading the finall chapter... o_O
ssj7chibividel chapter 20 . 1/12/2014
What juat happend...? o_O
dragonsoul11 chapter 2 . 10/30/2013
ehhh... da faq? he is a saiyan he knows how ho fight by this age!
dcp1992 chapter 22 . 9/26/2012
I just went back and re-read your story. I gotta say, it was as good as I remembered it when I first read it. Good thing is I(i guess) forgot some parts, and remembered others and I progressed through the fanfic. I love how you started with basically the end and worked around and made a plot that connected to the first chapter you wrote. I've read a LOT more fanfics since I first read this story, and I still haven't really read one that has something that every chapter is based off of that gose throughout the whole fic and then at the end you find out everything was related to one or more people/things (I've read some like that, but not many). Like how all the little hints from Mariya while Gohan was training and by the end, you find out she was one of the thing that made this whole thing start, way back when she was in high school. This was a really well rounded fic and thoroughly planned out from the beginning and came to light at the end. Not many fic I've read do that and that defiantly makes you and this story, out of about 1,000 fanfictions that I have read ove the yeas, in my top 5. Again great story!
Bilal Masood chapter 22 . 7/30/2012
Wow. I simply cannot describe what a wonderful story this was. There were times when I felt hesitant to continue, but I'm sure glad I kept reading. The ending conclusion to the story was plot was just superb! Such complexity in a story really draws my attention. All in all, it was a great read, and I look forward to reading your other stories. :D
Darkened Void chapter 21 . 9/4/2011
I just reread this story. Just as amazing the first time as it was the second time. Great job on this.
dcp1992 chapter 21 . 4/24/2011
I just got done reading this story and I have to say this is one of the best Gohan/Videl fanfic I have read. Even though it is a RL AU, the first Dragonball RL AU I have read, it still beats the other fanfics I have read. I loved it!
chaos saiyan chapter 4 . 4/20/2011
i love this story! its so realistic, not that i dont mind a good ki based fight ( who doesn't?) but so many people go through this and it's the perfect story to make sure you don't get overly engulfed in fantasy. GREAT JOB!
OddEnough chapter 20 . 8/9/2010
when i read this chapter, i was like this chapter has a ridiculous amount of plot twists and yet somehow i actually was able to follow them lol great story
RukiHina15 chapter 22 . 8/7/2010
This story was AWSOME! I loved how you added grief in the story but later on gave Gohan what he always wanted, love. I think it's awsome that you did what you had to do, which helped make the story a huge succes :) I also admire the great details you put through out the story, I think nothing lacked and nothing was over detailed. It was also great when you added info on the martail arts part, I very much admire the time you put into the story when it came to facts and researching. GREAT WORK XD
Rakashiru Ari chapter 21 . 8/3/2010
Totally awesome and EPIC story. 3 the storyline, 3 the plot and basically the whole dang story. I'm not really a fan of A/U fics,(cos basically the names of the main characters are totally redundant if there's not gonna be any relation to the canon) but I think it's safe to say you managed to pull it off well - VERY well, in fact. Good job! You totally made my day. Kinda sad when I came to the end. (Btw what ever happened to the Dolbys?) Once again, marvellous, simply MARVELLOUS! Keep up the awesome work! :D
GohanSSJ2x chapter 21 . 4/30/2010
this story is awesome, but the three things that i didnt like are the whole animal thing, i think ki would have been easier to understand, the fact that there were more OC's than cannon and that the last chapter's plots were all twisted together and weird but other than that good job cant wait to read more of your work soon
Ixde chapter 21 . 4/11/2010
Really nice,i loved it! I'm not usually a big fan of AUs,but this was really good :)
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