Reviews for His Saving Grace
Perfect.PairFan2278 chapter 3 . 3/13/2010
The people who say that this story is bogus need to shut up and start writing their own fanfics! If they're too retarded to see that it says AU right there at the top, then they are freaking blind.

Anyways, great story so far, and I'm loving the fact that Goku was a star tennis player, cause I love tennis~
vegeta997 chapter 21 . 12/28/2009
This was an amazing story. It was so beautiful. I will be reading your other DBZ works as well. I'm very impressed.
vegeta997 chapter 10 . 12/27/2009
I had a feeling Chichi would be coming back into the mix...Interesting...
vegeta997 chapter 9 . 12/27/2009
Yay for Gohan/Videl-ness! I love the way this story is turning out! It's so awesome!
vegeta997 chapter 6 . 12/27/2009
Wow, wow, wow. That's all I have to say.
vegeta997 chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
Wow. That was one of the best prologues I have ever read. I am very impressed and this story has my utmost attention... In short: it's really good!
PhoenixRe chapter 21 . 12/3/2009
Ok, so I finished the story.

It's good. It's not amazing but it's good.

It has realistic enough plot about a boy that gets picked on, how he copes with it, growing up, making friends, getting in relationships (there is some soapopera stuff there but no the spanish variety though) and finally getting his dream girl.
PhoenixRe chapter 20 . 12/3/2009
Ok this a mess of things. Really I am thinking of a spaggeti.

Way too many secrets and while I don't have a problem with that I feel that you threw them and their repents way too rushed.

I think it felt a little weak as a chapter. Like all the connections were glued together and the structure is ready to fall...
PhoenixRe chapter 19 . 12/3/2009
Bravo. I really liked your take on Avery and Michelle. Usually most people don't give an adequate reason for a change on perspective and ends feeling forced and fake. But your idea with the family matter was genius. It really forces the duo to face their actions and think about the effects they might had and from there it is up to the character you wish to give to the persons.

A powerful chapter and realistic as it should be for this type of incident.
PhoenixRe chapter 18 . 12/3/2009
Well, it was what I expected but still. Something felt amiss, or not enough. Maybe it's because of the childish and fairly poor plan of Jenifyr's
PhoenixRe chapter 15 . 12/3/2009
Really good chapter. Finally they woke up.

BTW I was thinking (oh no) they thought of a plan 2,3 years ago then let it and now they will put it in motion... Isn't the gap too big? Even if it was in their plan to befriend them and date them and all (but somehow it didn't give me exactly that idea) isn't it a bit too long? Or too avenging (for junior highschoolers I mean)
PhoenixRe chapter 14 . 12/3/2009
Revelations. Neat...

Pretty good chapter. It feels that the wheels are turning.
PhoenixRe chapter 13 . 12/3/2009

Cant say I like where this is going.(the story is good, is not the story I dont like, it's the situation)

Really though I would have though Videl was smarter than that. I am guessing that she did what she did out of reaction (jealous, come and get me thing) but I would think her above that...

As for Gohan, I buy, what with his way of growing up and evolution...
PhoenixRe chapter 9 . 12/3/2009
I was a little surprised.

I thought that you always intended for the eagle-bear-dragon to be used metaphorically or with some live in them with Gohan but you actually used it more literally (cant really explain what I want to say) with the others feeling the animals and Videl talking about them. Somehow it reminds me of supernatural manga with characters with alter egos/spirits/powers inside them that converse with them...

I cant decide for sure yet but for now I like this twist...
PhoenixRe chapter 8 . 12/3/2009
Talk about your dark twists...

Dude I am afraid to think of what will happen next...

And that's why I like it. Really great story so far
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