|Reviews for Unspoken|
| Synchro lover chapter 2 . 11/28/2011
| darkxangelx-xo chapter 2 . 10/17/2009
love it and the most important question yet is yassen alive ? please say yes i beg of you i love him ! i cant believe Horowitz didn't bring him back so many opportunities! by the way i adore all your fics ive read i don't think Ive reviewed them all yet but promise to get round to it soon.
| May Eve chapter 2 . 6/17/2009
Yes! Very much "likey"! So far, I love this story. It's so nice to read an AR fic that isn't just the same old plotline with a few twists (much as I love a number of those stories), not mention a fic that's well-written in every sense of the term. Congrats on a fantastic fic, I can't wait to see where this goes!
| Jusmine chapter 2 . 6/16/2009
You know that person who always walks into movies late and crawls over everybody to get the prime seat? Yes, that is me today. And, really, really sorry this is so late. You see, Youtube stole my soul. *serious nod* I started watching movies, and I found some of the most adorable gay movies and then I just couldn't stop watching.
Excuse time over. On with the fic! _
"Once he was done, he downed a bunch of chicken soup (Jack was right, it really did fix anything and everything)"
Damn. Now I want some chicken soup! Get rid of this stupid cold...
“Have a seat, Agent Rider,” Brush said, with his slight ‘Southern Drawl’, as Jack called the accent in some shitty B-movie they’d watched at one point or another.
Are you making fun of my accent? I think you're making fun of my accent. We do drawl, y'all. lol. _
Allow me to say that I loved Brush accusing Alex...
Or, no, more accurately, I love Alex being all awesome and ignoring it all cool-like.
Lovey, m'dear. _
| Lady Zarobiti chapter 2 . 6/14/2009
very good for the prompt- i like how sleepwalking was 'dead on his feet' rather than one of those where he goes out and saves jack from a ferocious bandit while snoring ;)
| IR chapter 2 . 6/14/2009
It's great, and I love how you're using the prmpts to form one seamless story...but to my knowledge, Tamara Knight is from the Ark Angel mission, not Skeleton Key...
| Sarruby chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
Aw... it's a nice ending for this chapter. I don't think the American health system is that bad, personally. What I like is the idea of an overnight bag, and the "conscience" part of this chapter.
| AllThatIsGoldDoesNotGlitter chapter 2 . 6/5/2009
Thisis really good and I like it but I noticed a few errors. Tamara Knight was actualy on the Ark Angel mission, not Skeleton Key. Also how would John Rider know about Harry Potter if he's been dead for 14 years. Although I guess since "John Rider" is just Alex's subconsious it's ok. Oh and the quote "Lifes not fair, why should the afterlife be any different?" is in one of the Pirates of the Carabian movies. I still love it though. Update soon!
| Mad Mogg chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
That 'Greg' guy annoys me...
I also like the idea of him having the night bag.
So yeah, it was good. But you probably already knew that.
I agree that twixes are yummy.
| feathersofbronze chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
likey. likey, likey, likey. very much likey
| Rid3r Chick chapter 2 . 6/1/2009
That was good. I love the way you write Alex. This seems as if it could be a continuation from the actual book. I can definately see that Alex is tiri
| CunningMascara chapter 2 . 6/1/2009
This was cute. There were a few typos and a couple of spots where it didn't flow well, but otherwise.
You've got the interactions between Jack and Alex down so well. I'm envious.
| Aimael chapter 2 . 6/1/2009
Great. I especially liked that about Ben and Knight being surprised Alex wasn't as polite as he should be. Very... canonish, in a few years, IF Alex still is a spy then, of course. Your writing is just as good as the last chapter - and that's good, I tell you . Question; why have you put this as "finished"? Since the 'mission' is over? Or because you don't want to write more prompts? Not really my business, but you know, curiousity and the cat and all that.
And did you have to put that in about the new HP movie? *suffers*
| TheNotedMusician chapter 2 . 6/1/2009
aww... the end was really cute. I like how you managed to work it into a plot! and they argument (and all the other things, like alex knowing all the people, and the overnight bag) was a great way to show a kind of 'epilogue' of the real books/missions! great work! update soon!
| TheNotedMusician chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
aww, the conversation was kinda cute...in a philisophical way. :D the way you did this was really interesting and origninal, and you did a really good job!