Reviews for Hotel
Kelby K chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
This rocks!
ChasingCheetahs chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Awesome! You have to write another one!
onimaster818 chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Good story Hard to find a good one of this sires
Mantinas chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
This was good.
Master Jesse chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Two words... Evra Von! I love him.

The only thing that kind of bothered me was that the paragraphs weren't clear...

And you totally should have thrown in something about Evra's fork tongue... frenching that HAS to be an experience.

Awesome though!
punkypuppy13 chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
This is hot!
Symphony Of Terror chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
"He sat up and began to message his friend's aching cock." lol

I think the word is massage :) The first part is confusing, by

which I mean hard to tell who is talking at some points. And I

think you should go back and un-bunch the paragraphs. Aside from the minor mistakes, I liked this story. Mostly because I am a major perv lol Oh and how old are Darren and Evra in this

story? Hopefully LEGAL, cause that would be really creepy if they weren't lol