Reviews for Deviant
Komiv chapter 40 . 2/7
So I was reading this again to catch up with the story for the sequel and oh my god I cannot believe I forgot about the twist holy shit...Very well done, hah.

Also I'm still not over the line "Time is going by, buffoon. Be strong, if you can afford it, otherwise you will enter that arena only to never leave." from a few chapters back. That's some Shakespeare-level phrasing right there.

Last couple of chapters were so very excellent. I love how much emotion you put into the characters, it really shows in the writing. Excited to go catch up with the sequel now!
Little Kunai chapter 39 . 10/28/2013
all in all it is still a heavy blow
Little Kunai chapter 38 . 10/28/2013
and where did you find your line TC? it seems its neither with decepticon which lost its way or autobot who did pay the price for their indfference
Little Kunai chapter 37 . 10/28/2013
those two
Little Kunai chapter 36 . 10/28/2013
bravo! well done with your twist i seriously never saw it coming! :D
Little Kunai chapter 35 . 10/28/2013
Little Kunai chapter 34 . 10/28/2013
i thought as much
Little Kunai chapter 33 . 10/28/2013
well screamer's gonna be the defeated one, considering there's another set of stories about TC. where does warp fit in with all this
Little Kunai chapter 32 . 10/28/2013
that was well done, specifically the past speeches.
Little Kunai chapter 31 . 10/28/2013
well now
Little Kunai chapter 30 . 10/24/2013
he sure knows how to get his way
Little Kunai chapter 29 . 10/24/2013
this whole scene has a very fox and the hound feel
Little Kunai chapter 28 . 10/24/2013
well...maybe you should find safe shelter elsewhere warp
Little Kunai chapter 27 . 10/24/2013
oh warp you can't!
Little Kunai chapter 26 . 10/24/2013
is he on the right path? only he knows that for sure
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