Reviews for The Real Don Juan Triumphant
WL-CFA chapter 81 . 1/23
I love this story so much. I read it whenever I need a laugh. Thank you
jojo chapter 3 . 8/11/2015
Um ... WHAT DOES the STORY MEAN?! I mean, this isn't even a story. But you must be good being able to write 81 chapters of it.

SORRY! ;)
magneticfield chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
I tried to read your story and got as far as I think it was 7 and got a violent headache ( and I never get headaches) . I give up.
Maybe it's me. I have read Phantom Of The Opera by Gaston Leroux 36 times or more and love it. Your story makes no sense to me and I barely see the humor in it. Strangely enough I see much humor in the original though.
I tried. Sorry
Osirius chapter 6 . 5/1/2015
OH ERIK YOU LITTLE TROLLER AHAHAHA
Osirius chapter 4 . 5/1/2015
AHAHA this is too good! XDD
FantomPhan33 chapter 81 . 11/4/2014
Well, I must say that this was a very fun and entertaining story! I truly loved how you took all the things from Leroux and turned them into something fun and easy to understand - as opposed to the dark and convoluted way HE wrote it. And while I loved the idea that it was all seen through the Daroga's point of view - he is a really funny guy, that Persian - I also loved how you let Erik tell a few things as well, since Rasheed could not be everywhere at once and we needed to know what Erik was thinking and doing from time to time. Thanks for the 'outtakes, bloopers, deleted scenes and the M rated extras' as well. That really filled in all the blanks.

Your version of Erik was just so sweet, he had a heart of gold wrapped up in a interesting package...hee hee...but you couldn't help but love him. He loved all women...EVEN CARLOTTA and that is saying something too! And of course all those girls could see beneath is outer appearance and see his heart of gold. And...what did you call them...his magic fingers? ha ha. Oh what a rake he was...is...will always be.

You did a fabulous job at your word pictures, your humor and your pace of telling he story. It was a privilege to read your work.

Thanks,
FP33
FantomPhan33 chapter 10 . 11/2/2014
Wow...sounded like Erik got just as much pleasure out of that as she did. Hmmmm, guess he won the bet. Poor Daroga. ha ha.
Now what...does he get to touch her...or will he want to. I mean this is new and fun for him, he may wish to peruse this. ha ha.
Oh dear...new managers means trouble.
FantomPhan33 chapter 9 . 11/2/2014
Oh Erik...will you survive? No touching? Oh you poor, poor boy. ha ha.
FantomPhan33 chapter 8 . 11/2/2014
Oh man! Erik is such a play boy!
Where do they go to find a woman Erik has not had indeed! Is no woman safe in Paris?
I would think not if the Daroga's words can be believed, ha ha.
FantomPhan33 chapter 7 . 11/2/2014
Oh I love this story of how he got his nick name...since it was pretty obvious that there was no way possible that he was ever the chief of police in Persia. ha ha. So...does it REALLY mean "its a lie?" I tried looking it up but found nothing. Silly Google Translate. ha ha.

I love how Erik has so much fun with stuff but is also cut to the quick when he thinks his friend is mad at him, shows his true heart and nature. What a dear boy!
FantomPhan33 chapter 6 . 11/2/2014
Well Erik my darling...you do play the part well...such a fine actor. And I can see why your Persian friend hated you at the moment...but he will admire you in the next heartbeat, ha ha.
FantomPhan33 chapter 5 . 11/2/2014
Oh so the 'lair' takes shape does it.
FantomPhan33 chapter 4 . 11/2/2014
Oh Erik! you are so BAD peeping in on the ballet rats like that! And the way our dear sweet Persian seems to be excited by the idea is shocking! OH but soooo funny.
FantomPhan33 chapter 3 . 11/2/2014
Oh Erik you are not only a hoot and a half but you are also very generous. I find I like this whole friendship with the despondent and cuckolded Joseph. Makes me pity the poor man and the bad rap everyone - including me at times - has given the man. Hmmmm, maybe one day I will make him a hero type...maybe. ha ha.
FantomPhan33 chapter 2 . 11/2/2014
Well now...this seems to be a very interesting view of Erik's life...I am intrigued. Always fun to read another's take on it. I will press on.
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