Reviews for Beauty and the Beholder
washed away again chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
That may have been one of the cheesiest things I have ever read but it was really good! No nausea or involuntary eye rolling or head injuries as your warning suggests. I like Alex's vulnerability about her age, I think that's spot-on.
insubordinationfreak chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Ultimate Bobby fantasy.
RemindsmeofaWestSideStory chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
That was too sweet! I loved it!
atheneblue chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
Aw. Fluffy, yeah, but pretty good PWP too. :D
YaneDirnt20 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
D'aw...Its so cute...I love it! Especially the end...so cute, so cute...
superfelix chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
She doesn’t want to just fuck him; she wants to make love to him...good start and good plan.

Bobby slowed down and thinks again...she’s all he has left, all he’s ever wanted, all he needs...Sweet!

and his lips descend upon soft, bare flesh...mhm...so good!

So much ministrations for Alex...yummy...She swears she can feel them, even in her toes.

Bobby is mean...“You say something?” ...I'm getting hotter and hotter.

as the next moment finds Bobby sitting back with his hands held up in defeat...sweet and now it's time for caressing Bobby.

Oh dear he is such a gentleman. Gives her all time for adjusting.

Wow, Bobby says so much right thing and Alex can't believe it. She feels good after a so long tome.

“I don’t know… I just like being able to touch you. To-to be close to you.”

Wonderful end...so good and romantic!
T'Jara chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
Sideeffects I showed:

Hotflashes, uncontrolled sweating, gasping for air...

This is a lovely story, cheesy or not! (And I say that as a non-shipper) Your style is excellent, lovely usage of words!
cifan chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
lovely and sexy and I thought this was great!
OuroborosSnyder chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Loved it! Very yummy.

~Snyder~
chlark4 chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Geez, that was great. So hot and steamy. Loved the end.