Reviews for Internal Monologue
numbuh 1x1 chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Awwwwwweeee, that was ardorable! BB was my favorite in Teen Titans! Really great and very awesome!
IHeartEru chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
AW

this is adorable, i loved it even though it was short (not that thats a bad thing or anything...)
Green Wild Kid chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
nice one

short and sweet

love this part:

“So…what do you miss about her?”

“I dunno. Everything.”

“Wanna be a bit more specific?”

“Her voice, her hair, her telling me that I’m an idiot, her sarcasm. Everything.”
grahamgarrett.powerofanime chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
I'll be honest: nothing happens... Wait a minnit, is he with STARFIRE? *snigger*. I'm not insulting you, by the way, but being with Starfire is a really odd idea...okay, I guess something does happen, after all.
BookerSeeFoodBookerEat chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
This isn't bad, i don't see anything wrong with it. Is there gonna be another chapter?
The Magician Joseph chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
You admitted from the onset that it was really bad. And not to be cruel, but it is.

There is too much dialouge and no substance around it. How does Raven react to the call? There is no imagery, and no conclusion.

Don't let this review be discouraging, let it bring out your perfectionist, let yourself bloom.

Ask yourself when your done, is it worth reading?

Cheers

-Joe
Raven2k8 chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Very nice, very short, easy to read and it's a BB/Rae! That's what I call a great short story! Keep on writing! :)