|Reviews for A Fool's Reality|
| Hakurei no Miko chapter 17 . 7/26/2014
more overpowered ocs... seriously, deflecting master spark... you better not make him as strong as reimu or something... of course i still enjoyed this chapter so alls well
| Hakurei no Miko chapter 15 . 7/26/2014
i think yukaris character is also a bit off. she truly cares and loves bat gensokyo. not to mention, although she loves to sleep, she usually only "hibernates" during winter. and it would have taken her literally a second to fix the barrier. but i like this chapter, new ppl in gensokyo
| Hakurei no Miko chapter 14 . 7/26/2014
on top of being overpowered, isn't kraids ability to negate special abilities a bit too much?
| Hakurei no Miko chapter 11 . 7/26/2014
once again, oc op alert! mokous really REALLY strong you know. like im okay with him taking down stage 4 or even stage 5 bosses, but stage 6 and extra stage bosses are really strong, so... anyway, i like yr story except for the bits with remilia, you're making her a bit too whiny and naive and childish, i think itll be better if you followed the canon remilia. and pls dont forget that she can freaking manipulate fate, holds the legendary spear of gungnir which never misses its mark, she is inhumanly strong and fast, can turn into a swarm of bats and has really good regenerative powers cause as long as one of the bats in the swarm survives, she can heal herself. and her spell cards are freaking hard. so just work on the overpowered oc and remilia and this story would be beyond awesome ze!
| Hakurei no Miko chapter 7 . 7/25/2014
hmm... i think your oc is getting a bit too overpowered. like seriously remilias spell cards are freaking hard, so are youmus. not to mention when you were writing the part with remilia i think you went a bit oc and followed the fanon character instead of canon.
| annom chapter 23 . 7/22/2014
I have not even read this chapter yet; but the very moment I read the chapter's name, I placed a hand to my eyes and knew that I was going to see THINGS. If Lovecraft is mentioned anywhere, I know the order of magnitude of what to expect. If the word "right" is used in within two sentences of the one that contains "Lovecraft", I know what will most likely happen.
| SynchroXyzStriker chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
This is SynchroXyzStriker and I’m here to review this story.
You decided to deconstruct many concepts and warped the plot to the point of Mind Screw. The name of the protagonist is meaningful. . . Hanta, as in the hantavirus (Correct me if I'm wrong, though). Nice one, and I noticed the usage of tropes in some chapters, too.
And this story also had influences from Shin Megami Tensei, specifically II (Lucifer against YHVH) and III: Nocturne (The second Reimu turned into a half-human, half-demon). I’ve read up to chapter 56 and still have a long way to go.
But I'm also here for something else; I am on a "writer's block" and I really need ideas; I was wondering if you can try reading my fanfic and giving out your thoughts on this? Granted, my story isn’t exactly a crossover, but it’s a Science Fantasy story nonetheless; my fanfic is called “Touhou Strikers – The Silver Lining"
Trust me; it's a lot more awesome than it sounds; I know my fanfic isn't that great, but I want your honest opinion on this one. Please reply back. I appreciate your reviews. It helps motivate me to write more chapters. :)
| ArcherShirou chapter 33 . 1/28/2014
Yukari was worried about something ... Now This is scary
| ArcherShirou chapter 31 . 1/28/2014
per I have a feeling that this fairy will give
| ArcherShirou chapter 30 . 1/28/2014
Kyoji is such fun, I really enjoyed this and I start liking much of Mokou
| ArcherShirou chapter 28 . 1/28/2014
when the Raim goes tell the truth Reimu?
| ArcherShirou chapter 26 . 1/28/2014
think very hard ,something more do insane and impressive than that
| ArcherShirou chapter 25 . 1/28/2014
insanity and further enhances
| ArcherShirou chapter 24 . 1/28/2014
insanity level is higher than ever,same for touhou
| ArcherShirou chapter 19 . 1/26/2014
the new sword is awesome