Reviews for A Fool's Reality
ArcherShirou chapter 5 . 1/25/2014
good fight
ArcherShirou chapter 4 . 1/25/2014
...Raim said everything,what should not talk, and now you will need a miracle to not take a beating
Scourge From BloodClan chapter 5 . 1/23/2014
... Ok mate one question : HOW THE F- DID HE BEAT REMILIA WITH A KICK TO THE STOMACH ?! He JUST CAME to Gensokyo and doesn't know jack -ish about Danmaku or anything else and he beat a VAMPIRE with a kick ?! HOW DOES THAT WORK ? Merry Sue much . AND he beat Sakuya, too, W.T.F . If I see him beating Flandre with a kick to the head I will F-ING DIE !
justinmurielle chapter 61 . 10/11/2013
Fwah... that was exciting! You did a good job sir *salute*, and reimu missed some action back there... well raim was right, he doesn't want reimu to be taited or learned or to know the way it is even she possesed that magatama. Hahaha, I'm sure reimu will be angry and worried when raim disappered like that, good luck raim... and sir, updated me like always by sending on my yahoo mail, and thanks for sending today... I'm looking forward on next release
justinmurielle chapter 60 . 10/7/2013
I really thank you for updating me on this chapter, thank you.. and will update me on
releasing new chapter? I'll wait for it... things got interesting, i mean more interesting.
Sonanoka21093 chapter 12 . 10/2/2013
And... now it goes backwards a bit. Or, perhaps it's because I was growing used to it. A fine enough chapter, although things do still have the typical stu vibes.
Deflagrare Argus chapter 60 . 10/2/2013
I liked the main story. The way you executed the parts where the forth-wall was broken down were exceptionally executed. Sometimes you left on cliffhanger but you didn't make it every chapter and the times you did do made me eager to see the next part. I didn't understand some of the dream sequences this is dismissible. Some of the bad things were more of in depth wish for me so they are so its also dismissible.

This story involving a simple man who's plunged head first into a fight for his life and Gensokyo making hard moral choices and ultimately the decision on what to do with Gensokyo.

Pros: Unique, enjoyable OC, interesting side-stories.

Cons: No major ones.

Overall score: 10/10 Just go on with how your doing it.
Sonanoka21093 chapter 11 . 10/1/2013
Thank god, the music is over! The music, it hurts! Song-fic's are just so... ugh... I feel so unclean... I hope this doesn't become a habit, or I won't be able to resist the urge to stop reading... Anyways, the parts without the music were fine enough. Could be better, as always, but it is a fine enough chapter all things considered.
Sonanoka21093 chapter 10 . 9/30/2013
Certainly improving, although it's slight. The plot is curious, although he certainly does seem like a marty stu at this point. I shall continue on, as I said I would, and see just where this story goes. Wherever that is, it will certainly end up in an interesting place.
Sonanoka21093 chapter 9 . 9/30/2013
Aha! So English 'is' your second language! Thank goodness, I was afraid that something was wrong in some way or another. Anyways, I am starting to enjoy the story. Either it's growing better written, or I'm growing more skilled at ignoring the flaws. Although, your system of writing does baffle me a tad. I can see the method to your madness, but it just seems a bit strange is all.
Sonanoka21093 chapter 8 . 9/28/2013
I have difficulty with both reading and 'not' ready this, curiously enough. It does hurt to read, but I at the same time can't help but wonder what will happen next! It's an odd feeling, certainly. I look forward to seeing just how this story grows as it goes.
Sonanoka21093 chapter 7 . 9/27/2013
You... really should work on editing the older chapters. The new ones are great! The old ones give me a headache to try and comprehend. I can't wait till this story starts to get better, honestly. I honestly have no idea how it will get from point A to point B! That newest chapter was pretty darned good! This chapter, on the other hand...
Sonanoka21093 chapter 59 . 9/27/2013
It has been some time since I last read this fanfic! I think I should get to rereading it, as I don't remember a thing! I had been meaning to read it, but I simply realized that I lack knowledge in where I left off when I stopped reading for whatever reason. A nice chapter as always, and I look forward to more from you!
Feng Lengshun chapter 59 . 9/27/2013
Actually, someone already made an *accurate* map of Gensokyo. It's called "Gensokyo Traditional Map" by CaptainOnimaru and is posted on deviantART, go google it. On gambling, it's actually more of math really, be it in the players (search on cracked{dot)com "6 Reasons Professional Poker Is Way Harder Than It Looks"), or the dealer (search on cracked{dot)com "6 Silly Sounding Jobs That Are Way Harder Than You Think", it is number one for a reason). Other than that, I believe that you should start fixing your grammar, perhaps by getting a Beta reader. Also, you might want to read the dialogue scripts of the games and the additional materials as since there's no more 'illusion' now, you would want it to be as accurate as possible; like on Flandre, as pointed in Diamond in the Rough 13 and 14, she isn't some crazy girl, just a destructive but still sane vampire who has a rather morbid and bad sense of humor.
justinmurielle chapter 58 . 9/17/2013
You mean that's all? No chapter next or i need patiently for a next chapter? Well this this story is really intersting in many... ways and i mean it... wow... i feel theres something more... about his new ability on his bokuto for survival... and since reimu has become a demon, and can't use her divine power to fight... i wanted to know how reimu fight on that state... in many many many ways... and since spell card system to be ignored now on a current state of reimu... i wonder some of them still use that... well they respect that rules... i wonder how they survive now... I'm curious in many ways hahahaha...if there is... let us know
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