|Reviews for She Didn't Ask Why|
| immyownsuperman chapter 16 . 6/6/2009
Good Job! Your an amazing writer! Update soon!
| KellyRoxton chapter 16 . 6/6/2009
Wow what a direction this could go if he forgets his relationship with Abby and yet remembers it with Jenny. Hmm
Great Job. Happy Birthday to you sorry I'm a little late. Hugs Hope you had a GREAT one.
| Eliza-angel chapter 16 . 6/6/2009
lol yeah Tony probably would be jealous that he didn't witness that ... good work
| ducky72 chapter 15 . 6/5/2009
One might think you often just picked a few scenes and wrote them down, but an attentive reader will see that youve added a lot of things, sometimes just a sentence or two, to link the shows events to the relationship Abby and Gibbs have in your story. Great job!
I wonder where this is going. Looking forward to the next chapter :-)
| ducky72 chapter 6 . 6/5/2009
I dont mind if a scene or two are integrated into a story to help explain its development. Moreover, “Bloodbath” is one of my favorite episodes. No way I would not like a nice story about it :-)
| ducky72 chapter 5 . 6/5/2009
Wow! I didnt expect this sudden “wordless confession”. I thought the sanding strip falling to the floor (previous chapter) was a sign of shock, because Abby was right with what she had said.
Yep! *Raises hand* Great picture!
| ducky72 chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
I like the descriptive style of the introduction to set some facts as starting point for the story.
I highly appreciate the work someone puts into proof-reading. Sometimes you can see clearly who does or does not. For people like me, whose native tongue isnt English, it is even more important to find stories that - in the best case - are spellchecked and grammatically correct.
| immyownsuperman chapter 15 . 5/31/2009
AH! No this is gonna be bad! Hurry up I want to see what happens next! (Not that I don't already know basics)! But please I'm begging you keep Holly out of the story please? It will be to bad! WAH!
| raven612 chapter 3 . 5/27/2009
Well ma'am I just stated reading your story and plan to continue reading it tomorrow when i am awake. It's 3:52am here and I must get to sleep, but I'm loving your story so far! Can't wait to read more tomorrow!
| STLFAN chapter 14 . 5/25/2009
Nicely done. Well written and sweet.
| Eliza-angel chapter 14 . 5/25/2009
lovely ;) keep it coming! :)
| ncislove chapter 14 . 5/25/2009
Such a great chapter! And I'm having such a hectic day, it was great to take a break and read this. So sweet!
| HawkPen chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Ugh. I think an intro chapter should try and grab someone's interest, not bore them to death with past stories that you could look up on Wikipedia or create in 5 seconds. Not sure about this one.
| KellyRoxton chapter 14 . 5/25/2009
Oh my goodness. Who took the photo are the threating Gibbs. Hmm what's going on. Oh no. very scary. Can't wait to read more. Please write and post soon. Hugs you Tight.
| STLFAN chapter 13 . 5/24/2009
He could make happy.