|Reviews for EO Challenge Those We Leave Behind|
| LEMarauder chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
Well you know I just HAD to investigate once you mentioned it! ;) As gorgeous and painful as the episode it tags. Sam's raw agony is so true to form...just heart-wrenching (but so good that it demands multiple read-throughs) Those last two line really do drive it home. Thanks for pointing me here! I'll admit though, hurt!Dean is my real twist and I can see you have a myriad of that, so I'm off to play there!
| sweetysmart0505 chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Man, this totally was sad! Good job though!
| Mad Server chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
I love Sam pressing his forehead into the red earth. Great image of grief!
| LivingForTv chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
You are right, it's sad. And still, we know it had to happen. Very good image, if I didn't know he would rise again I'd be crying now. Good job.
| Micaiah chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
So sad. Nicely done. Would have loved to seen this in the show.
| KatyMM chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
So desperately sad and it filled in that gap beautifully.
| Vampyvii chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Oh yes- very sad one here, that desolate wood grave marker- Very lovely piece...
| InSecret chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Oh it is sad. But. Gorgeous too. But sad. Um. I LOVE this line:
'Alone, his forehead sank to press against the red earth.'
Heartbreaking, but beautiful imagery. Lovely work!
| Enkidu07 chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
that was sad! but so well crafted. And I noticed that you also used Frame... I tried to get that in mine because I didn't play last week, but couldn't do it - kudos!
| blackcatswhiskers chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
oh Jane - this is too sad ...
| DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
James T says get Bird another Bailey's...she deserves it for being funniest angel in the Romford garrison
| bhoney chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Nice description. Such a heartbreaking image, Sam kneeling by the grave, forehead to the ground. Was the dirt red? I totally missed that. Will have to go back and re-watch.
Really poignant and heartbreaking.