|Reviews for Undercover|
| flootzavut chapter 6 . 6/1
Not being able to sleep sucks, but rereading some old favourite Kibbs fics helps :3
I love Gibbs being all hot and bothered muahahahahahahaha and of course, the early morning snogfest did not hurt... I would like to be woken up that way ;p
| flootzavut chapter 13 . 2/5/2013
I love love love that you ended this with Ducky. Fab story, utterly enjoyable!
| flootzavut chapter 12 . 2/5/2013
"this one about a baby marmoset, a Hawaiian dancer, and a toothpick"
You should send that to the writers/producers, even the thought of Ducky telling a tale that involved those three things made me giggle like a loon...
| flootzavut chapter 11 . 2/5/2013
"He and Fornell may have words occasionally, and they take an almost childish delight in snitching each other's crime scenes, but when the chips are down he knows he can count on the other agent to understand that he's at the end of his rope."
Not sure even the good folks at NCIS could sum up that friendship any more succinctly.
| flootzavut chapter 10 . 2/5/2013
"leading the best (and most fractious) team at NCIS"
Haha, fractious is the perfect word.
| flootzavut chapter 9 . 2/5/2013
| flootzavut chapter 8 . 2/5/2013
"They both ended up disgracing themselves rather badly—Gibbs by stage-whispering his uncensored opinion of the whole procedure in Kate's ear, Kate by giggling uncontrollably at his outrageous comments until she nearly choked on her wine"
I love this so much I can't even...
Also love the callback to the emergency blow, one of my all time favourite Kibbs moments 3
And DiNozzo bating Gibbs from the other end of a video connection...
And Ducky being Ducky...
| flootzavut chapter 7 . 2/5/2013
"First there was her little stunt at the pool yesterday, which he knows full well was carefully designed to get all over his last nerve"
This made me grin so hard...
| flootzavut chapter 5 . 2/5/2013
Fwibble merp asflagle fnarr.
I wanna be woken up that way...
| flootzavut chapter 4 . 2/5/2013
"Gibbs," she murmured softly, "do you really think that a man who's been married for five years is going to be that openly jealous of some waiter staring at his wife?" She glanced up to meet his challenging stare.
"If it were my wife," he said, the words slow and weighted with half-hidden meanings, "I wouldn't want another man looking at her if we'd been married five years or fifty." His voice deepened, roughened slightly around the edges. "And it wouldn't matter who it was, or where we were, or why it happened. The only man who looks at her like that had better be me."
Gibbs being all possessive gets me every time... Yum!
| flootzavut chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Ps I love that you included director Morrow. Often the Kibbs fics I see transfer Kibbs to later series and later directors, but I always loved Morrow myself :)
| flootzavut chapter 2 . 2/5/2013
This made me laugh several times, but it was Tony's suggestion she visit a lingerie shop that killed me. Can't help but wonder how Gibbs would react to that!
Love your stories, by the way, among the best NCIS fanfic I've read. I'm currently working on one that involves undercover Kibbs, not sure where it is going though it is fun working it out :)
| linelm chapter 13 . 2/10/2011
| Rosajean chapter 13 . 12/30/2010
Really great story! I've definitely read some poorly written undercover stories before, but this one was so well done & I loved it! Are you planning on continuing it? Or writing a sequel?
| BrightAngelofDarkness chapter 13 . 10/3/2010
Are you still continuing the story? I am dying for the next chapter :) I didnt really like Kibbs at first but then your story came out and im hooked ! Good job so far. I love the dance and the last chapter. ;)