|Reviews for Training the Swan|
| Hope4more chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
I am laughing at the thought of Charlie showing up. That will be hilarious, in a scary kind of way!
| inatowncalledforks chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
| msbutterflycat chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
they are going to kill each other
| SarcasmicLoser chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
so hot. i think i need a cold shower. (does that even work for girls) idk. anyway awesome chapter can't wait for an update ]
| Hope4more chapter 2 . 5/14/2009
Well I guess Edward isn't the only one with an attraction issue. Great chapter.
| Hope4more chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Just found this, after you mentioned it on your AN for Womanizer. I really like this, can't wait to read more. Very interesting idea...even if it is taken from a movie.
| CRob25 chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
Now you write 3 of my most favorite stories. I love the idea that Charlie is a mob boss. I can't wait to see what happens.
| inu16kags chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
this is great please update soon
| SarcasmicLoser chapter 3 . 5/14/2009
haha nothin better than sexual frustration in a story
| SarcasmicLoser chapter 2 . 5/14/2009
i'm addicted to this story already.
| mischief-maker1 chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
Evil! I love ya though! This story is gonna be terrific!
| mischief-maker1 chapter 3 . 5/14/2009
Unh. You're killing me here, babes! Off to read the next one!
| fonsy chapter 2 . 5/14/2009
"Should doves fly out when they lay my body in the hole?"...LOL, that line is priceless.
| EandBforever chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
Charlie, what a cockblocker! Jerk! Loving this new story. Can't wait to read more!
| nanymilan chapter 3 . 5/14/2009
you are such a TEASE!
poor, poor Edward!
This Bella is a terrible tease!
I cant wait for the next chapter!
I really hope Edward dont explode cause the sexual tension!
This is the first fanfic that I read with such amount of sexual tension for the very beginning!
I need a cold shower...