Reviews for Training the Swan
Hope4more chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
I am laughing at the thought of Charlie showing up. That will be hilarious, in a scary kind of way!
inatowncalledforks chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
Awsome story!
msbutterflycat chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
they are going to kill each other
SarcasmicLoser chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
so hot. i think i need a cold shower. (does that even work for girls) idk. anyway awesome chapter can't wait for an update ]
Hope4more chapter 2 . 5/14/2009
Well I guess Edward isn't the only one with an attraction issue. Great chapter.
Hope4more chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Just found this, after you mentioned it on your AN for Womanizer. I really like this, can't wait to read more. Very interesting idea...even if it is taken from a movie.

Great start!
CRob25 chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
Now you write 3 of my most favorite stories. I love the idea that Charlie is a mob boss. I can't wait to see what happens.
inu16kags chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
this is great please update soon
SarcasmicLoser chapter 3 . 5/14/2009
haha nothin better than sexual frustration in a story
SarcasmicLoser chapter 2 . 5/14/2009
i'm addicted to this story already.
mischief-maker1 chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
Evil! I love ya though! This story is gonna be terrific!
mischief-maker1 chapter 3 . 5/14/2009
Unh. You're killing me here, babes! Off to read the next one!
fonsy chapter 2 . 5/14/2009
"Should doves fly out when they lay my body in the hole?"...LOL, that line is priceless.
EandBforever chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
Charlie, what a cockblocker! Jerk! Loving this new story. Can't wait to read more!
nanymilan chapter 3 . 5/14/2009
Oh God!

you are such a TEASE!

God!

poor, poor Edward!

This Bella is a terrible tease!

I cant wait for the next chapter!

I really hope Edward dont explode cause the sexual tension!

This is the first fanfic that I read with such amount of sexual tension for the very beginning!

I need a cold shower...

;)
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