|Reviews for Training the Swan|
| Kimmie43 chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
She wants him too...Like it..Like it alot...Are they moving too fast though. They just met and her body is covered in brusies...Can't wait for next chapter.
| rhenea5018 chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
Great chapter and the beginnings of a great story. I can't wait to see where this goes.
| BaconButt chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
What the... I keep scrolling down for more but, that's it!
Evil cliffy! Wah!
On the bright side, Ellie Love.
| siromygod chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
You are a freaking updating machine you know that? And a story posting machine. Jeez, you've got like millions of works in progress going. I don't know how you do it, really. Lol. But good job with this chapter.
| CaroleLeo chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
I am so glad Bella is a little bit of the aggresser! There are a LOT of emotions going on.
Thanks for the update.
Hope for more soon!
| Zany Smile chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
that was awesome! : )
| Lexie2516 chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
I can totally understand Bella. Poor Ellie and what she must be going through!
I love this story. It's extremely interesting. Thanks for the update.
| Tennyson10 chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
excellent plot line. Keep writing!
| lovegal678 chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
omg stupid cliffy god i hate those. when are u going to update this story? i think i remember u worte it somewhere but i can't find it. do u mind telling me again?
| HellaAwesome chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
Wow! I just looked at your reviews! You got an insane amount just for the first chapter! I guess that makes sense though, I'm not the only one that has you on Author alert!
I'm enjoying it so far. Looking forward to another update!
| gumibear26 chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
I totally understand where Bella is coming from about correcting her daughter. Edward is basically a total stranger and he's undermining her authority. At this stage in her healing, being in control of herself and her daughter is all she has, so he better not mess with that.
About James - why is he still breathing? I figure that if he messed with the Swan's daughter he would be so much dog meat. Why didn't Charlie kill him? Does Bella have a restraining order out against him? So many questions, so few chapters to review.
And poor Edward - looks like he's got his work cut out for him. In order to keep the boss happy, he has to find a way to turn down Bella's advances. It looks like that will be rather hard to do, considering that all the blood drains from his thinking brain when he's around her.
This story is a lot of fun!
| iamJugsTheClown chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
well done, E!
Lovin' it so far! Can't wait until we get more!
| asf134 chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
OMG! KISS! KISS! KISS! KISS! lol! MORE!
| barbarito chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
Oh Holy Hotness! The last part of the chapter was way hot. Bella getting a little turned on by edward's assesment! What a fucker James is! Poor Bella and Elizabeth. Looking forward to much more of this! Awesome job!
| Frenzy In Delirium chapter 2 . 5/5/2009
Awesome chapter. I like how you write Bella as being strong, not shy and timid.
Excited for more. The movie Enough is great, I'm glad someone wrote a story that was inspired by the movie. Keep up the good work. Your a really great writer :)