Reviews for Training the Swan
Ri40 chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
hey i really love this story, but when are you updating edward cullen aka the womanzier.

i just realise that all those stories you wrote i love them.

you are a really good writer.
Isabella303 chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
LOVING this story so far! I always love a bad-ass Charlie! And the fact that Edward cusses like a sailor AND can take down Emmet...HELL YES! The sexual tension between ExB is going to be awesome! Great job on this! Also, loved the Rose and Em story...I hope we see more of them in future chapters!
lambcullen chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
"my poor celibate dick hardened" - HA!

I really like the premise of this... im of to read the rest!
Kimmie43 chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
Great chapter..Awesome. I loved it. I still think they are moving kinda fast. It makes Bella look easy...Is there a reason why you are making them jump in the bed together so fast. I love how Edward interacts with Ellie. And I love the whole husband and wife cover up.

Please reply.


CaroleLeo chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
I am so happy that the 'ground rules' have been established! HA! I really am enjoying this story - I also love your others...if people have never read you before - they are really missing out.

Thanks for the update...hope for another soon, but if you continue with The Beautiful Hitchhiker' again (evil cliffy), I wouldn't be too upset...or Subject: Edward, or Flight of the Phoenix (Shower scene - really!)...any really!

Thanks for this update...
xsleepingswanx chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
so much sexual tension between those two, loved it

great chap
tc88 chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
Wow are u sure ur just one person cuz i've never seen anyone take on so many stories not that i'm complaining cuz i love to read them, but wow i totally admire you they are all great stories! Thanks for another update...
cshorte chapter 2 . 5/8/2009
Great chapter! didn't expect Bella to make the the first move!
sophie1670 chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
Yes, you are evil. Is she gonna wake him up with a blow-job or something and really screw with him? Or are you going to drag out the tension?
toolazytosignin chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
;) you are evil, great chapter, loovoed it, and love ellie!
christag banner chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
Thanks for the quick update. Umm, if the cover story is that they are married then what is the cover story for Ellie? She called him by his name at the store. Just a thought. As always, I look forward to the next update. :)
bcruz chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
im really excited to see where u take this story...great job on the chapter...

sophie1670 chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
I like this. I'm also kind of curious if Esme and Carlisle will be involved (and how)
malana09 chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
this story is like the movie: Enough...

only WAY better!

i love it so far!

update soon!
TwiDi chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
EVIL! THAT WAS EVIL! i'm loving Bella... the hints she's throwing his way making him go crazy all the time are AMAZING!

Poor Edward! I loved how jealous he got when Mike was trying to get Bella's attention lol such a stupid boy!


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