|Reviews for Training the Swan|
| MissRe chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
Poor Edward is right... of course the forbidden fruit will be tempting. Elizabeth looks like she will be a cutie. Great job.
| Muntzy09 chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
You have some great stories ive read some of your others! This one is kinda funny...hehe! More please :)
| emomusickid chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
really good chapter i can't wait for the next chapter so when you get time please update soon
| ThuGoldenChild chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
I love all your stories, I have read them all. This story is really good, I like how it's turning out.. I can't wait for more sexual tension.. I love it.. Great chapter, can't wait for more thanx for this update.
| Krugness chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
Bella seems to jumping into her chance at freedom headfirst. I would imagine it would been a long time since she had been touched as gently as Edward touch her. She certainly seems focused on two goals; learning to protect herself and her daughter, and breaking Edward's resolve to keep his distance. I can't wait to see if they christen the workout room already.
| azure0610 chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
You know what I REALLY like the most about you and your writings. I LOVE LOVE LOVE the way you write Bella. You don't write her as a passive, insecure little twit like most people.
You write Bella strong, confident, sexy, and stubborn but a good stubborn.
I LOVE that and I totally love you.
I think Training Bella might just be the best combination of them all. I can't wait to see where this goes.
| amwine chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one! I really like all your stories I have read so far. Thanks!
| xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
im no sure if bellas the tease or you are for that cliff...stupid charlie complicates everything!
| fer chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
damn... i wonder if the name of the chapter is because of how you leave us wanting a wetward, or because of all the chapter...hum...now i'm thinking it's i still love YOU, and every single storie that YOU write so yeah, i think that's all hope you update soon¡
| Aries4495 chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
OMG Wetward! Iwant one lol. Great chapter keep going lol.
| spedclass chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
| Lexie2516 chapter 3 . 5/9/2009
You are the tease. You teased us at the end of last chapter and this one as well.
Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
| labellamafia chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
Erica, at this point I'm sure there isn't a story you could write that I wouldn't like. Seriously.
And I'm excited for Smut Mondays!
I'm loving how Bella is in this one, poor Edward. :)
| Twilightobsessed09 chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
WHOO! THAT WAS WHOA! THERE IN THE ENDING AND I'M STILL TRYING TO REGULATE MY BREATHING FROM THIS CHAPTER AND THE TEASER 4 THE OTHER! UPDATE SOON!
| WeasleyWeakness chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
Lovely chapter, lady! This is already one very entertaining story.