|Reviews for Training the Swan|
| xsleepingswanx chapter 2 . 5/7/2009
I like this, well I like everything you write
| WeasleyWeakness chapter 2 . 5/7/2009
Oh mah gah. I am in love with this so far! I absolutely cannot wait for more. I'm really excited for it.
| cshorte chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
I like it so far...can't wait to read more!
| vampirelove11 chapter 2 . 5/7/2009
cant wait for the next chappie!
| luv4edwardcullen chapter 2 . 5/7/2009
good story so far
| xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 2 . 5/7/2009
aww! i love how he bonded with Ellie!(which is an amazing nick name!) and the faact she feels the same lust as him...wow...charlies gonna have some more targets for his hit lists...
| emomusickid chapter 2 . 5/7/2009
really good chapter i can't wait for the next chapter so when you get time please update soon
| dead-is-the-cat chapter 2 . 5/7/2009
Awesomeness. Awesome, awesome, awesome. You rock, girl.
| Scorpio11 chapter 2 . 5/6/2009
You do tell a good story, my dear. I loved Edward planning his own funeral. I can't imagine everything Bella's trying to cope with after all she's gone through and all she's just learned about her father.
| Krugness chapter 2 . 5/6/2009
I'm okay with longer chapters and fewer cliffy's. It's true but I will take what I can get. :) It sounds like Bella got a talking to from Charlie too. lol The end was unexpected and I can't wait for the next chapter to see his reaction. Poor Edward, he's doomed. A cute little girl to charm him and her Mom inflaming his libido.
| Clancy67 chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
Looks like another incredible story Erica! You single-handedly provide some of the best Twilight fanfic out there. I'm amazed at how you are able to write so many great stories simultaneously. I can't wait to read more of Training the Swan! Thanks so much for sharing your story and your talent, I enjoyed reading it.
| twirlacullen517 chapter 2 . 5/6/2009
| hannahmom16 chapter 2 . 5/6/2009
As I am a huge fan of all your stories; I am shocked that you have time for another but already I'm enjoying it and excited to see where this goes.
Quick question...did you author that poem or is he remembering a well known poem? It seems really well written and I didn't know if it was yours or not.
| sourasalemon chapter 2 . 5/6/2009
LOVE IT! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE, THE ENDING WAS FANTASTIC!
| dani7603 chapter 2 . 5/6/2009
YAY i loved the chapter iunderstand y bella is acting the way she is shes tryign to protect herself and her daughter
o the assesment and how her dad is gonna kill her cant wait
keep up the great the wrk