Reviews for Training the Swan
iamJugsTheClown chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
love it, e!

the tension is killer! and i love ellie and bella.. for a quick second when they were in the grocery store they reminded me of gilmore girls! LOL

i am lovin' the feisty-ness of bella.. then again.. all your bella's are strong and feisty like that. just LOVE it!
Haylzi chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
Excellent chap I love the whole teasing thing how long will edward be able to resist and I love confident bella pls updste soon this is fast becommin one of my fave stories :)
teambellaedward chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
dame hot :)
Moonless Nite chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
OMG! I think i just fell in love with sexually frustrated Edward. It incredibly hott! lol:D can't wait for more!
GetDrunkOnVictory chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
She is a tease, damn!

Ellie is so adorable. :)

Charlie is so going to kill them. ;)
Guest chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
All that teasing is just... GUH.

And Wetward next chapter?

*head explodes*
Nethead97 chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
Talk about wicked sexual tension! Bella was laying it on thick and it looks like she may just get her way!
DullyBeautiful04 chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
oh FUCK!

i cant even imagine what they are both going through..shit..i dont know how you wrote it but there was so much sexual tension in that chapter i fucking felt it! wow wow wow! i hope wetward means some action here, because i dont think they can last this long!lol

Update soon!1
Jammya chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
HA Bella is being soo evil. But it is a little stange that she is that um.. physical with Edward after what happened to her.

I have read all of your stories save Fame and Fate and Pm,lm,sm :] And I usually love your stories so they will probably be next. ;]]
lovegal678 chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
omg can't wait for the next chap
barbarito chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
sourasalemon chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
wow, you can definitely see the sexual frustration there, haha this chapter was so good! love this story, can't wait for more
icefang7 chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
edward has got to win charlie over! really good story and

thanks...can't wait for more!
Leeshaann chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
You gotta update soon... Fucking love this... Need more soon... Please
dani7603 chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
ive read almost all ur stories and ilove every single one

ok iloved this chapter it was so good and that was one hell of a cliffy there at the end :)

oo the kiss they had hot and then he showed her what she does to him dman hes hard alot must hurt ha

he was thinking about he naked and wet coming out of the pool nice

and then the cover story about them being married was good they even had the rings good love emmett for that

keep up the great work :)
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