|Reviews for Training the Swan|
| Isabella303 chapter 2 . 5/8/2009
HA! eye-gasm! Poor Edward is going to be so sexually frustrated! BTW..I saw this story on the TW-ed threads. I just LOVED the summary so I told the author I beta for lambcullen, to give it a go! We have both read some of your previous stories. Her stories are AMAZING! If you haven't read them you should! She is so talented!
LOVE Edward and the poetry and saying he was going to compose on his piano is he kept the obsession for Bella! I laughed so hard at that! Plus Emmet got the jealousy already going in Edward ;) I love a snarky Em and I can;t wait to see more of him!
Now, on to Elizabet..OMG how CUTE IS SHE? I just LOVE her character! he names she was calling Edward had me laughing so hard! I also love her nickname, Ellie..too cute!
I like the way you are writing Bella..it is so flawed and human. She has that tough girl exterior but I can already see it breaking around Edward.
There is NO WAY I am going to judge Bella harshly. I completely understand the reasoning's for her actions..especially being abused and treated poorly by a man. And when Edward is showing compassion to her and her daughter, it only makes sense for her to want to feel attractive and wanted.
GREAT CHAPTER ONCE AGAIN! I seriously am becoming so addicted to this story! Great Job!
| lambcullen chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
I love Ellie's names for Edward- they made me LOL, and you said WETward? damn you have me... A Cussing Wetward is all i need outta life!
Thanks hun, and I'm hungry for more! D
| lambcullen chapter 2 . 5/8/2009
Damn I love a possesive Edward, but i guess you already know that! and he says my fav cuss word .
| Ri40 chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
hey i really love this story, but when are you updating edward cullen aka the womanzier.
i just realise that all those stories you wrote i love them.
you are a really good writer.
| Isabella303 chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
LOVING this story so far! I always love a bad-ass Charlie! And the fact that Edward cusses like a sailor AND can take down Emmet...HELL YES! The sexual tension between ExB is going to be awesome! Great job on this! Also, loved the Rose and Em story...I hope we see more of them in future chapters!
| lambcullen chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
"my poor celibate dick hardened" - HA!
I really like the premise of this... im of to read the rest!
| Kimmie45 chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
Great chapter..Awesome. I loved it. I still think they are moving kinda fast. It makes Bella look easy...Is there a reason why you are making them jump in the bed together so fast. I love how Edward interacts with Ellie. And I love the whole husband and wife cover up.
| CaroleLeo chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
I am so happy that the 'ground rules' have been established! HA! I really am enjoying this story - I also love your others...if people have never read you before - they are really missing out.
Thanks for the update...hope for another soon, but if you continue with The Beautiful Hitchhiker' again (evil cliffy), I wouldn't be too upset...or Subject: Edward, or Flight of the Phoenix (Shower scene - really!)...any really!
Thanks for this update...
| xsleepingswanx chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
so much sexual tension between those two, loved it
| tc88 chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
Wow are u sure ur just one person cuz i've never seen anyone take on so many stories not that i'm complaining cuz i love to read them, but wow i totally admire you they are all great stories! Thanks for another update...
| cshorte chapter 2 . 5/8/2009
Great chapter! didn't expect Bella to make the the first move!
| sophie1670 chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
Yes, you are evil. Is she gonna wake him up with a blow-job or something and really screw with him? Or are you going to drag out the tension?
| toolazytosignin chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
;) you are evil, great chapter, loovoed it, and love ellie!
| christag banner chapter 3 . 5/8/2009
Thanks for the quick update. Umm, if the cover story is that they are married then what is the cover story for Ellie? She called him by his name at the store. Just a thought. As always, I look forward to the next update. :)
| bcruz chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
im really excited to see where u take this story...great job on the chapter...