|Reviews for Training the Swan|
| wisdomous chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Yay! I already know I'm going to like this story! Can't wait to see how this one plays out.
| christag banner chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Looks like you have a good start here. I can't wait to read more. :)
| siromygod chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Gahahaha, Edward is so dead. Love this new story. I'm looking forward to where it goes. )
| noseinabook chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
You have to be the most prolific fanfiction writer that I read! I have been following "womanizer" religiously and I just started "Beautiful Hitchhiker". I love them both. This one has a great start! Can't wait for the next chapter...
| Naomitron chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
I'm pretty much a huge fan of your work, and I like the movie you're modeling this story after. Even though scuzzy Edward makes me die a little inside, it makes it worth it to see him start to soften up toward Bella.
I know this is going to be good. It's you, and that says a lot. I eagerly await the next update.
| TwilightFan104 chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Great start. I love your stories and look forward to reading this one. I loved the movie Enough, so this should be good. Seems poor Edward is going to have his hands full. The sexual tension with Bella is only the begining. It won't take long for Elizabeth to have Edward wrapped around her little finger.
Looking forward to the next installment.
| GetDrunkOnVictory chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Ooh, sounds interesting! :D
I'm excited to see what is going to happen in this story. :)
| kcullenk chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
can't wait for the next one!
| sourasalemon chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
haha, thats funny! so far its good, i can't wait for more!
| mirul chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
O.M.G. Do you believe in love at first sight? I do since NOW!...Do you want to hear the story? DO you? :) Ive got you on my alert list and suddenly my email peeped with sign of new story...GREAT summary, instantly got me interested...and the chapter? well, lets say my heartbeat is in overdrive...I like me some good story and I can smell pure awesomness here...you will hear from me very often...like every other day I think *rubbing hands* ...yep, thanks...love, m.
| TwilightKrazy chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
i like this. It's one of the few ACTION stories on ff. You dont see them often. Is it all going to serious or is it also fluffyness? Oh and is just edwards point of view or is it also bella's point of view. Plus, last one i promise, can you lower the F' bombs? Or is that to make edward look like a bad boy? Is he a bad boy or a good boy? Food Luck answering all my QUESTIONS!
| saranic chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
This sounds like it is gonna be really good and something very different. I love all your other stories, can't wait to see where this one goes.
| dani7603 chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
so i took time away from doing my final to read ur new story and im glad i did cause i loved it its ao good and i cant wait for more
i love they way u wrote it
i love how edward knew he was fucked the moment he saw bella ha hes gonna get himself in trouble
this story is different then other ones i read i love how u wrote charlie as a mob boss and how edward helps trains his employees and how charlie never told ne1 about his daughter but is willing to help her no matter what
aww elizabeth sounds cute i cant wait for more
keep up the great work :)
| phoenixhunter47 chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Erica - I love your stories and I can already tell this one will be no exception.
I can't wait to read more of this one and I'm gald you'll be updating so often.
I don't know where you find the time to write and update so many stories. It took me all week to write my last update!
| xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
wow. this is good so far! cant wait till the updates!