This story has so much potential, you capture their characters perfectly:)

This is a Really good story and i really hope you continue it! i really wasnt expecting Danko to show up!, but i cant wait to see how this one ends up! please continue!

Please continue!

It was a fun read and I really really hope you'll update soon!

Yeah, hilariously enough, the only thing I could think after reading that first chapter was that generic pop song that the kids are so up on nowadays. You know, about not being able to make this crush go away? God, I sound old.

Anyway, cool story. You've really got a talent here.

You've got me interested, I hope to see more soon :)

I wasn't expect Danko to show up but it was cool anyway. So why hell is CLaire protecting Sylar? LOL I can't wait to find out.

That was great!

I throughly enjoyed that! Sylaire rocks and you've put them in the perfect situation. Sylar has always had a thing for Claire and poor Claire just hasn't realized she's got a thing for him too! Keep it comming!

This was good. Update soon

Nice story! I can't wait for Sylar to find her again haha

I hope the next chapter is coming soon :D

love it please write more

Hm, well it started off kind of weak and a bit cliched, but it got better and held my attention, which is hard to do, but this one actually has potential, so we will see.

I look forward to seeing how this progresses, but would like to see longer chapters, and fleshing out scenes more. You go from one scene to another too abruptly, and sometimes mention something that we did not read happen, which is confusing...

But overall is pretty good, better than most out there!

Hehe. So Claire knows what Sylar is feeling now. She in love with

the bad boy.

intresting loved it

maria